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July 8, 2022 at 1:30 pm #112228Anonymous
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@gracie-j. *cries* I KNOWWWW!!!!!
Aww, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!! Louisa is AMAZING!!! And Isabel? So, SO, SWEET!!! SHE’S SUCH A DOLL!!! <3<3<3
I’m glad you laughed, lol. XD XD XD
Ah…yes, no one holds a knife up to Riker!!!! But like, RIKER WAS SO CALM ABOUT IT AND EVERYTHING!!!! Leon slapped him too. Poor, precious, wonderful Riker. :'<
Leon, I know you’re hurting and all…but come on!!!!
Louisa later invites Riker again (since she’s so sweet and Leon’s away from the house) but he tells her that he promised Leon that he wouldn’t. Riker doesn’t break promises. (Another wonderful trait of his) But Louisa’s response will probably be thus: “Yes. But you made that promise while Leon was pinning you down and holding a knife to your neck.”
So true. And she says it so straightforward and calm. XD She could literally be in an earthquake and be calm about it. XD XD XD
But then again…she’s been through a lot. Her son, Abelard, left Germany and is an RAF pilot, btw. He and his mother reunite though. Don’t worry. 😉
July 8, 2022 at 2:03 pm #112234Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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YOU ARE SOOO WELCOME!!! I know, she’s so darling too!!! <3333
I KNOW HE’S THE BEST I ADORE HIM!!!
Augh, I love Riker. He gets better every day.
Haha, she’s absolutely PERFECT!!! AH THEY DO YAYAYAYAY!!!
July 8, 2022 at 2:12 pm #112237Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@gracie-j. Riker’s daughter Naja is so sweet too! I need to write something with her in it and share it with you!
Riker does get better every day. I feel like I’m learning more about him every day. I guess that’s what happens when you don’t completely plot things out, lol. XD I do a bit of an outline, but besides that…I pants. XD And oftentimes my writing is better that way. But I do need a bit of direction, else I’ll get WAYYYY sidetracked. But so long as I have my message in place, everything will come to a climax eventually. 😉
YEAH, THEY DOOOOO!!!!! AND I’M SO HAPPY!!!!! She hasn’t seen her SON IN YEARS!!! Of course, Abelard’s going to learn that his younger sister died. :'< *cries* I’m thinking Abelard ends up bringing her to England with him. 😉 Or maybe, like Leon, they’ll go to the US!
July 8, 2022 at 3:12 pm #112246Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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YES YOU MUST!!!
SAME GIRL. I’m literally the exact same way. 😉
*sobssssssss* Why must happy things be so saaaad??? Ooh, awesome!
July 8, 2022 at 3:24 pm #112249Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@gracie-j. *cries with you* I KNOWWWW!!!! Actually, most of my characters end up moving to the US after the war’s over. XD
Riker does too. (well…not exactly…but I’ll only tell you if you don’t mind more spoilers. XD)
July 8, 2022 at 8:53 pm #112384Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Smart people! 😉
(YAASSS SPOILERS!!!!!)
July 9, 2022 at 8:35 am #112565Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@gracie-j. Riker turns himself in after Leon forgives him. It was his plan…but he then gets sent to prison for the next…ten years perhaps. BUT, GOOD NEWSS!!!!!! They send him to prison in the US, which is way better than say, being sent to the Communists after WWII. 😉
July 9, 2022 at 12:02 pm #112623Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Awww, that just breaks my heart!!! But, yes, very good news!!! And he did the right thing, which is good…I guess. XD
July 9, 2022 at 5:28 pm #112883Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@gracie-j. Yes…he did what was right. 😉 That’s all that matters, right!? (Even though it breaks our hearts. Trust me, I know. DX) But very good news that he gets sent to the US, yes. XD
July 9, 2022 at 6:57 pm #112886@freedomwriter76
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*stares down at the shattered remains of my heart lying scattered on the ground*
Like, I have no words at this point (which, for an aspiring author, is strange).
Ryker…
RYYYYYYYYYKKKKEEEERRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I DIED. I COMPLETELY AND OFFICIALLY DIED. I ALSO HAVE A NEW FANDOM, AND I’M NOT EVEN SORRY.
July 9, 2022 at 7:16 pm #112888Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@lydia-s. It breaks my heart too!!!!!! O_o (I’m breaking everyone’s hearts. Feels bad being a person…but being a writer…different story. XD Know what I mean?)
EVERYONE IS FALLING IN LOVE WITH RIKER AND I AM SO HAPPYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE’S MY FAVORITE TOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Welcome to the Fanclub, Girl!!!!!!!!!!! 😉 (DON’T BE SORRY!!!! I’M A PART OF GODLYFANTASY12’S FANCLUB NOWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! Besides, I want everyone to join my fanclub, lol. XD Every writer’s dream, am I right? XD XD XD)
July 9, 2022 at 8:01 pm #112892Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@gracie-j. @elishavet-pidyon. @starshiness. @lydia-s. Alright, WHO WANTS TO JOIN THE FANCLUB!? *hands out a sign-up sheet with my name, in big, pink, sparkly letters, at the top* 😉
July 10, 2022 at 2:52 pm #112995Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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*signs name* It is done.
July 10, 2022 at 3:52 pm #113039Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@gracie-j. WELCOME TO THE FANCLUBBB!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉
July 11, 2022 at 11:26 am #113133@freedomwriter76
lol Yes, I know exactly what you mean! It’s so encouraging when your writing affects your readers emotionally.
Grimm’s Fanclub??? I’m a part of that one, too! I love him so much… Poor lil’ guy… :'(
Haha, yes, you’re so right! XD
AND I’M TOTALLY SIGNING THAT SHEET!!!! XDXDXD *uses a permanent marker to add name*
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