Alpha/Beta Readers for My Dystopian WIP

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May 3, 2018 at 8:42 pm #72006
Jenna Terese
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@skredder @seekjustice Here’s chapter 8

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I3WMWDus6-dny3KZO-vPHI-KNqTbPUzd5yUYR2iGLYc/edit?usp=sharing

@sarah-anson @warrenluther04 Would you two like to read it too? 🙂

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May 3, 2018 at 10:31 pm #72016
Sink
@sarah-anson
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@jenwriter17 Yes, I’d like to continue beta reading all the chapters you put up, if you don’t mind.

*vader vibes*
May 3, 2018 at 11:25 pm #72017
Jenna Terese
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@sarah-anson Awesome! You should have access now 🙂

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May 9, 2018 at 10:29 am #72220
Ingrid
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@jenwriter17 I am completely caught up on reading your story and I’ve gotta say….I am totally captivated! Keep up the awesome work.

(And post the next chapter soon, will ya? 🙂 🙂 🙂 )

A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
May 9, 2018 at 11:30 am #72229
Jenna Terese
@jenwriter17
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@ingridrd I am SO GLAD you like it! I’ll try to post the next chapter soon, I’m still writing it. 🙂

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May 9, 2018 at 7:30 pm #72261
Jenna Terese
@jenwriter17
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@seekjustice @skredder @sarah-anson @ingridrd Here’s chapter 9 everyone! 😀

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jeGlitQ4YGIDWcHT4CY0aSZAXpak0LnPmJq8jq6eZNI/edit

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May 12, 2018 at 10:07 pm #72491
Jenna Terese
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@skredder @ingridrd @seekjustice @sarah-anson @warrenluther04 Alrighty everybody, this is the last chapter!!!! *sobs*

I’m not sure if the ending is quite right, so be sure to let me know what y’all think. 😉 When you’re finished reading it, I have some questions I’d like to ask you all if you don’t mind. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tSrseDLsgcH7yYGypMC735WwouwJZqEkxUjyhs_XrRg/edit

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May 12, 2018 at 11:35 pm #72501
Skredder
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@jenwriter17 I finished reading it! Most of my comments are going to have to wait til tomorrow though.

"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 13, 2018 at 11:41 am #72503
WarrenLuther04
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@jenwriter17 Oh my goodness! Really!? Great job!

I unfortunately won’t be able to read it yet; I’ll try to read it once I get home from church. But, y’know, it’s Mother’s Day. 🙂

Great job so far!

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ENFJ-T ... I think (haven't taken the quiz in awhile)
May 13, 2018 at 1:24 pm #72504
Jenna Terese
@jenwriter17
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@skredder Awesome thank you! 😀 Once everyone’s done I’ll post the questions 😉

@warrenluther04 Thank you! 😀

Yeah that’s totally fine; I wouldn’t be able to reply to any comments until tomorrow anyway 🙂

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May 13, 2018 at 7:16 pm #72509
Skredder
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@jenwriter17 Okay. I’m still working on getting the comments done.

"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
May 15, 2018 at 3:04 pm #72609
Ariel Ashira
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@jenwriter17 *wipes sweaty palms on jeans* I just read all the chapters except the last three, which I can’t get access to. Oh man, I just LOVE this! One of the best things I have ever read!

"In a mask, was he?"
May 15, 2018 at 4:04 pm #72610
Jenna Terese
@jenwriter17
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@ariel-ashira Wow, really?! Thanks for reading it. 😀 😀 😀

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May 15, 2018 at 5:00 pm #72612
Jenna Terese
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@warrenluther04 @ariel-ashira @skredder @ingridrd @sarah-anson @seekjustice @whoever else I missed Here’s the questions now that y’all have finished reading my book. Thank you all so very much! Your comments always make me so happy and help me to improve. <3 I’m sorry if I’m posting this and not everyone has finished it yet; I’ve lost track of who has and who hasn’t yet 🙂

1. Who was your favorite character and why?

2. What was your favorite scene/part and why?

3. Were there any parts that you found confusing, unnecessary, or hard to understand?

4. Were the characters consistent in their personalities?

5. I’m still learning how to use theme in my books (so I’m not sure if it even existed really in this one 😉 ), but if you had to guess, what would you say the theme was?

6. Did you find the ending satisfying, tying up enough loose ends but leaving space for a sequel?

7. How was the world-building, considering it’s set in the future?

Those are all of them…..for now. 😛 Thanks again!

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May 15, 2018 at 5:01 pm #72613
Jenna Terese
@jenwriter17
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@ariel-ashira Sorry, I just realized you said you get access to the last chapters? 🙁 Was there a problem on my end? Do you want me to re-link them to try again?

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