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  • #68521
    Jenna Terese
    @jenwriter17
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      Hi, all! As some of you know, I’ve been working on a dystopian book. I haven’t figured out yet if I want to wait for the first draft to be done to look for alpha readers, or edit before beta readers, or have alpha readers for each chapter as I’m writing it.

      But I was wondering if anyone would read my first chapter for me and tell me what you think?

      Here’s the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Z5vicMp5hAB5-S_gIRJRZxv5T2J4vyOzHBg4Q_LKMug/edit

      Let me know if the link doesn’t work. Or if comment access isn’t on or something, cuz I’m pretty unfamiliar with Goggle docs.

      Thank you!


      @rochellaine
      @jane-maree @seekjustice @dekreel @dragon-snapper @skredder @ingridrd @kaya-young @daeus

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      #68525
      Rochellaine
      @rochellaine
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        @jenwriter17 I just sent in a request for access.  You’ll see my last name on the email address it shows. (You know my real name now, from my website. 🙂 )

        "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

        #68528
        Jenna Terese
        @jenwriter17
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          @rochellaine did it work? I hope i did it right…..

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          #68529
          Rochellaine
          @rochellaine
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            @jenwriter17 It worked! 🙂  I’ll read it in a few minutes and then let you know what I think.

            "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

            #68531
            Jenna Terese
            @jenwriter17
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              by the way, I forgot to mention to everyone to ignore the spelling/grammar mistakes 🙂 haven’t edited yet…

              I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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              #68537
              Jenna Terese
              @jenwriter17
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                @rochellaine Thank you so much for reading my first chapter! I’ve never had anyone read my first drafts before. like, ever. thanks so much for your honesty and help! <3 😀

                • This reply was modified 6 years, 8 months ago by Jenna Terese.

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                #68539
                Rochellaine
                @rochellaine
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                  @jenwriter17 Thank you for letting me!  I enjoyed it.  And I’m glad you aren’t too scarred by your first experience with a first-draft reader! 😀  Did you see my post in the KP Captions topic about beta readers?  I think Josiah’s face at the end perfectly expresses the authors’ feelings when their beta readers dissemble and dissect their novels. 🙂

                  "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                  #68542
                  Jenna Terese
                  @jenwriter17
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                    @rochellaine ah, no I didn’t see that! was it recent? then i might be able to find it…..

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                    #68543
                    Rochellaine
                    @rochellaine
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                      @jenwriter17 Yes, it was recent.  I’m the last one who posted something there. 😀

                      "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                      #68546
                      Jenna Terese
                      @jenwriter17
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                        @rochellaine just looked at it! hilarious! *looks at outlining notes to make sure something like that doesn’t happen* 😉 😀

                        I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                        #68549
                        SeekJustice
                        @seekjustice
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                          @jenwriter17

                          I just requested access, I’m anordinarypen, just so you know 😀

                          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                          #68561
                          Jenna Terese
                          @jenwriter17
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                            @seekjustice okay, i think i let you have access. lemme know if it didn’t work.

                            I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                            #68573
                            Jane Maree
                            @jane-maree
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                              @Jenwriter17 okay so I don’t want to go into full editor mode and scare you (been there, done that, it was bad xD) so what exactly are you looking for critique on? The general overall chapter? Or some more details like showing vs telling, etc.?

                              Writing Heroes ♦ Writing Hope // janemareeauthor.com.au

                              Jenna Terese
                              @jenwriter17
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                                @jane-maree probably general overall chapter, but also stuff like inconsistencies (which some readers have already pointed out), and yes showing/telling stuff. Thank you!!!

                                I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                                #68583
                                WarrenLuther04
                                @warrenluther04
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                                  @jenwriter17 Could I beta-read? I feel like I should return the favor since you beta-read for me. 🙂

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