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July 23, 2023 at 11:45 am #151923
@mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @freedomwriter76
Yeah I’m aware this is sad
But I’m almost done with a few more chapter 😭
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 23, 2023 at 1:11 pm #151925@mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @freedomwriter76
so let me take a moment to explain how this reality works, Wanda is the one using the stones to form this reality, and in a way, she’s manipulated herself to forget the Avengers and stuff, but every now and then things will happen that will remind her of the past and what actually happened
so it’s like she’s at war with herself
she also can get surprised by things in this reality, because she basically coded the world, but what happens in it is unpredictable
so here are two more chapters, and uh…
here’s the thing about this fic, is if you didn’t know that Wanda was using the stones to build a perfect life, you would think this is just a sweet fic about a wonderful family but…
we know there’s more to it
Chapter 3
“I brought over the recipe books!” Molly announced entering through the back door of Wanda’s house.
Wanda came down the stairs and looked at her neighbor. “What?”
“I have to say, you’re making the new neighbors feel right at home, by inviting them to dinner,” Molly had a big mouth and usually didn’t pay attention to what other people say.
“Tonight?”
“Yeah, what other night, could it be?!” Molly said in an obvious tone.
“Yeah, sorry it just has been a hectic day, now I remember, and thank you.” Wanda looked through the books and stopped at a certain one. “Sokovian recipes, this sounds interesting,”
“Oh, you know the country of Sokovia,”
Wanda hesitated and then looked up from the books, and at Molly. “Yeah… I’m from there,”
“Oh, I just assumed you were American, after all, you don’t have an accent,”
“Yeah… I guess I lost it,” Wanda’s face filled with worry, but she shook out of it and looked at Molly. “Thank you for bringing the books,”
“No problem,” Molly left through the front door. Giving a dramatic wave as she left.
Wanda shook her head, Molly was an odd neighbor, but she was sweet. Wanda quickly dialed Vision’s number.
It went to voice mail, but she left a message.
“Hi Vision, this is your wife Wanda, and I know what tonight is, I guess we’re having people over,”
Wanda hung up the phone, and then looked around the kitchen, she had a lot of work to do before the new neighbors arrived.
~*~
The knock echoed through the house, and Wanda walked over to the front door, Vision right behind her.
She smiled as she opened it, and looked at the man standing in the doorway. She tilted her head a little. “It’s nice to meet you, and we’re so glad you could come,”
“It’s nice of you to invite me,” the man, was tall and had short blond hair, with piercing blue eyes. “You’re the Maximoffs right?”
Wanda looked at Vision and smiled. “Yeah, we are,”
“I’m Steve, Steve Rogers,”
Wanda looked at him more closely and then gave a skeptical look. “Come on in,”
Wanda gestured for him to take a seat on the couch.
As Steve took a seat, Billy and Tommy came bolting down the stairs.
“Mom, Dad! We have our magic act down,” Tommy announced.
“Boys, we have a guest,” Wanda scolded.
The boys looked disappointed. Steve smiled at the energetic boys.
“I would love to see a magic act,” Steve stated smiling at the kids.
The boys lit up, and then they look at Wanda and Vision for approval.
Wanda and Vision shared a glance and then nodded with a smile for the kids to begin.
Tommy and Billy put on their best performance, but every now and then they would slip up, and Wanda would use her powers to bail them out.
When the act finished, everyone and the room applauded.
“That was by far the best show I’ve ever seen,” Steve said with a laugh, he had to admit there was something likable in Wanda’s universe. Steve was struggling to remember what he had come here to do. And no doubt that was because of Wanda.
~*~
“To be totally honest, I forgot you were coming,” Wanda said with a laugh.
“I’m shocked anything can surprise you… in this town,” Steve stated, staring at Wanda.
Wanda looked down at her plate, Vision reached for her hand and looked at her to explain. She just gave a gentle smile.
“Dad, can we get a bunny?” Tommy asked looking at his dad.
Vision looked at his son. “Why do you need a bunny?”
“So we can make him disappear, duh, and so we can have a pet, we’ll take care of him we promise,” Billy pleaded.
Steve couldn’t help but chuckle at the two boys.
“It’s funny, really how things can disappear, Bunnies, cards, and uh… stones,” Steve still looked at Wanda.
She scowled and then looked at Vision. “Hun, can we go talk for a second,”
After a moment of silence at the table, Wanda and Vision came out into the room.
“Boys if you’re serious about wanting a bunny then you and your Dad can go to the pet store, and pick one out, we think you’re responsible enough.”
Wanda did feel like it would help her kids to have something to be responsible for,
and she wanted to talk to Steve alone.
“Really?!” Billy stood up from his chair in shock.
“Really,” Wanda said with delight.
“Yay!” The twins ran and grabbed their coats. “Dad come on! They might close soon,”
“I’ll see our guest out,” Wanda said with a smile to her husband.
“Alright,” Vision smiled at his wife and then left the house.
Chapter 4
Wanda looked at Steve from across the table. She put a smile on her face and took a sip of water.
“My kids are chaotic most of the time,” Wanda said with a laugh.
Steve didn’t even smile, he gave a stern look to Wanda. “You know what I’m here for,”
“I have no clue what you’re talking about,”
“don’t play dumb with me, I’m trying to protect you, there are people who want you dead, I’m trying to prevent that,”
“If I give you the stones, I lose everything,” Wanda’s eyes glowed red.
“I’m so sorry about everything, but if those stones don’t get returned, things in this universe and others could go horribly wrong,”
“I’m so sick of saving the world, Steve! We save everyone, except who I need,” Tears filled Wanda’s eyes. “Why am I always left to pick up the pieces, you guys steal the stones and become the heroes, and I steal the stones and I become the villain. How is that fair?”
“I’m sorry, but this is wrong…” Steve sighed. “If there was any way I could’ve helped Vision I would have,”
Wanda leaned back in her seat and sighed, wiping her tears away. “Fine, I’ll give you the stones,”
Steve looked almost shocked.
A knock on the door interrupted the conversation.
Steve raised an eyebrow as Wanda opened the door.
“Sorry, I’m so late,”
Steve stood up out of the seat, recognizing the voice. His eyes almost watered with joy as he saw Peggy, standing in the entry of the house.
“Hello Steve,” Peggy smiled at Steve and then turned to Wanda. “I’m his wife, but I had a terrible headache, it’s better now,”
Wanda smiled and then looked at Steve.
Steve kept his eyes on Peggy, her smile bringing back so many memories, until there were no more memories. He couldn’t remember anything, and he forgot what he had come here to do. He had given in to Wanda, and now he was playing a part.
Steve looked down at his hand, where he had a beautiful wedding band around his ring finger.
“Mom! Look at the bunny we got!” Tommy announced, coming into the house. “We already decided we’re going to spend the hundred dollars we win on a big mansion for her,”
Wanda laughed. “She’s adorable!” Wanda said looking at the white and brown bunny, in the cage.
“We named her Carrots,” Billy stated.
Wanda smiled at the boys and the container they were carrying. And then turned back to Steve and Peggy.
“Guys this is Steve’s wife, Peggy,” Wanda introduced.
“I feel terrible for being so late, and now it’s probably time for us to go,” Peggy stated.
“Well you live right across from us,” Wanda emphasized the location, looking at Steve. “And you’re welcome to come by anytime.”
“Yes, we’d be delighted to see you again,” Vision stated, shaking Steve’s hand.
Wanda gave Peggy a hug goodbye, and like that Steve and Peggy were on their way.
Wanda turned to see her sons sitting at the counter, giving Carrots, well carrots.
“Thank you so much!” Billy said hugging Wanda.
Wanda gripped Billy tight, closing her eyes. “You’re so welcome,”
“Now why don’t we go set up her cage in your guys’ room,” Vision led his children up the stairs.
After they got Carrots a nice spot on the boys’ desk, Wanda and Vision tucked their boys in.
Wanda smiled as she kissed the top of Tommy’s head. Tommy looked up at her and smiled.
“Mom, what’s that thing you always say? The one about families,”
Wanda looked over at her husband and then smiled at her children. “A family is forever, we could never truly leave each other even if we tried,”
The boys smiled, looking up at their parents who were standing at the entrance of their room.
“I am so thankful that I’m your mother,” Wanda said, turning off the light.
She and Vision left the room and stood in the hallway.
Wanda went into Vision’s embrace. “I love this,”
Vision held Wanda close, a smile forming across his face. “Me too,”
Wanda clutch Vision tighter.
I won’t ever lose this,
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 23, 2023 at 2:29 pm #151929Awww… it’s so sad 😭😭
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
July 23, 2023 at 2:36 pm #151931I know!!! I hate it, yet love it at the same time!!
Marvel was so cruel to Wanda *cries*
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 23, 2023 at 2:38 pm #151933Yeah.. 😭😭😭
It’s so weird though, how they went to dark stuff with her…
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
July 23, 2023 at 2:40 pm #151935Yeah… technically she was the scarlet witch in the comics, but… I think they took it too far, especially because her powers were from experimentation, not magic
ugh stupid comics
there’s actually a lot of really dark stuff in the comics, which is why I don’t read them
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-ThorneJuly 23, 2023 at 2:42 pm #151936xD… Ikr!
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
July 24, 2023 at 12:30 am #152026@mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h
I have another chapter!!!
And guys, Bucky’s entering Wandavision
why wasn’t this the plot in the actual show
Chapter 5
“And this is officially a hostage situation,” Hayward said watching the screen. He turned to everyone in the room.
“It’s not like that,” Sam stated.
“So can Steve leave at any moment?” Hayward debated.
Bucky sighed. “Steve gave in, he had a choice,”
“I want snipers in there, imminently,” Hayward left to exit the room, but Peter got in his way.
“We can’t let you do that,” Peter stated, still trying to show respect.
“Aren’t you supposed to be in school son?”
“It’s uh… summer sir,”
“Shame,” Hayward tried to leave again but Peter blocked him once again.
“Sir, we can’t let you hurt her, she’s one of us,” Peter responded.
“So you’re all terrorists?!”
“Speaking as someone who was mind controlled by some very evil people, I can honestly tell you, she’s not evil, just incredibly hurt,” Bucky stated.
“Well, her being hurt is hurting other people!” Hayward protested.
“We’ll send someone else in, someone who she can’t manipulate,” Clint had been silently in the corner, but it was time for him to come up with a plan.
“I’ll go,” Peter suggested.
“Don’t sound so enthusiastic, people might think you want to be a star of a drama tv show,” Sam said with a grin.
“I know a lot about the stones, I’d be perfect,”
“Except you lost Tony,” Clint stated.
Peter’s face saddened, and everyone started to think about who they had lost in their life.
Sam had lost his best friend Riley.
Clint had lost Natasha.
Peter had lost Tony.
Which left Bucky, and he was also the one everyone was staring at.
“Bucky have you lost anyone?” Clint raised an eyebrow.
“One, that’s a very private question, two, it’s also an insulting question to answer,” Bucky looked around the room. “But uh… no,”
“Perfect,” everyone in the room said at the same time, except Hayward.
“I won’t allow this! S.W.O.R.D. is running this show, not the Avengers, the way I see it, it’s none of your business,”
“What makes it your business?” Clint protested.
“Vision was in our facility until she stole him,”
“Why was he in your facility?” Sam took a few steps closer to Hayward.
“We were dismantling him,” Hayward said, avoiding eye contact.
All the Avengers looked at each other. Something was up with this guy, but nobody knew what.
Hayward’s phone started to ring, he pulled it out of his pocket and answered the call.
“Hello,” Hayward nodded his head to the call. When it ended he looked at the Avengers. “I have to go, don’t do anything until I get back,”
When he left, all the Avengers grinned at each other except Peter.
“Is there something I don’t get?” Peter asked looking at the group of older and more experienced Avengers.
“Just we won’t be listening to Hayward’s instruction,” Clint said with a grin. “Bucky get prepared to go in,”
“Me and Peter are going to do some research,” Sam stated. “I think there’s more to this than we think,”
“Sounds good, I’ll stay here and handle Hayward,” Clint turned back to the screen and smirked.
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-ThorneJuly 24, 2023 at 9:58 am #152030Oohhhh… wait, so what happened in the actual show then? Lol
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
July 24, 2023 at 10:01 am #152031Well none of the Avengers are in it
And it’s mostly sword agents
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-ThorneJuly 24, 2023 at 10:19 am #152036Ohh… weird 🤔 Yeah, I think i like your idea better.
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
July 24, 2023 at 5:28 pm #152094@smiley aww how sad!
this’ll make out to be a very interesting story though.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
July 25, 2023 at 10:51 am #152154Oh wow! I really like this!
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
July 25, 2023 at 2:02 pm #152189Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley love it!!!
Wanda…and Bucky….😭😭
July 25, 2023 at 2:11 pm #152191Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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*i somehow missed chapters 3-4…lol*
WANDA, HOW DARE YOU DO THIS TO STEVE!?
I DON’T CARE IF YOU’RE SAD, YOU LEAVE THE BOI ALONE…LET HIM GO LIVE HIS LIFE HOWEVER HE WANTS AND GIVE HIM THE STONES, OKAY!?!?!?!?!? STOP MANIPULATING EVERYTHING AND EVERYONE!!!!!
*cough cough* Okay…ahem…rant over
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