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August 20, 2023 at 6:34 pm #154299
@freedomwriter76
I know right?! I love Kate, and Yelena is just amazing
And I’m begging for Yelena and Bucky!! I want it so bad!!!!!!!!!!!
they were brainwashed soldiers, who no doubt have guilt, and they’re both very capable and they would compliment each other so well
also not going to lie… I’m loving Pietro more and more… Why?! *cries* he needed so much more screen time
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-ThorneAugust 20, 2023 at 6:44 pm #154302Also
I watched some clips from Falcon and the winter soldier on youtube
and OH MY WORD!! Bucky and Sam, they’re the best
and the Wizard scene where Sam is like
“so you get what I’m saying?”
And Bucky is just so serious. “No, I don’t”
they’re the best!!
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-ThorneAugust 20, 2023 at 9:08 pm #154319Of course!
@freedomwriter76 @miley
I know!! Hawkeye was pretty good, my sister is obsessed with it 😅 We’ve been wanting to watch TFATWS but haven’t gotten around to it yet.. hopefully soon! 😁
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August 21, 2023 at 3:40 pm #154344Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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Y’all soooo need to watch TFATWS; it is amazing 😍😍
August 21, 2023 at 5:30 pm #154366@smiley wow! I actually think chapter 3 was less confusing than what would’ve happened if Marvel had made it, lol.
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
August 22, 2023 at 8:42 pm #154496@mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @euodia-vision
So I have another chapter!!!!
And I’m sorry to the Pietro fans… Including myself
Also, I went back and realized that when I posted the prologue for the second book, all the tags didn’t go through… so if you have read that, it’s on the page before this… and it might clear up some things
Chapter 4
“You think you’re more powerful than me?” The other Wanda asked, forming her powers around her.
“Well I do have a bit more years of experience,” Wanda lifted herself up, her outfit changing into her classic red suit, her headband forming around her orange hair.
The other shook her head with confidence, she was the first to attack. Sending Wanda flying across the room.
Wanda didn’t waste time getting back up, wrapping her powers around the other Wanda. Tightening her grip around her.
The other Wanda fought it with her powers, gaining a little bit of strength to send another attack knocking Wanda off her feet, and making her lose her grip.
“I really don’t want to hurt you, after all, you’re me,” The other Wanda stated, walking over to Wanda.
Wanda got back up again, she was a little rusty when it came to using her powers, but she was feeling good now. “Don’t worry you won’t,”
The other Wanda wasn’t even sure what was happening, now here she was hitting the Cabin corner hard, and Wanda walked over to her.
Wanda stopped to look at the girl, the young hurt Wanda before her.
She was reminded of what she told Pietro in West View.
When I lost you, I lost a huge part of me.
You were always there for me, I wouldn’t be who I am without… you. My terrible childhood was so much less terrible with you…
You’re my twin…
Wanda remembered those words and then looked at the other Wanda.
“Go ahead and finish the job,”
Wanda swallowed, bending down to look at the other Wanda. “I’m sorry, I know how it feels,”
Wanda looked up at her, anger filling her. “No, you don’t!”
She then tossed Wanda across the room. Grabbing chairs and tables and sending them at her.
Wanda stopped them but she didn’t make any counterattacks.
Wanda stood back up facing the other Wanda.
“Why won’t you fight back?!”
“I can’t fight you,” Wanda took a few steps forward. “Not when you’re this hurt,”
“I’m not hurt! I’m angry… at the person who took my brother!”
“Is that what you tell yourself? To ignore your pain?”
The other Wanda grew tired of hearing this and sent a blast of her powers at Wanda.
Wanda did the same, both of their powers meeting in the middle of the room. But Wanda’s powers were stronger than the younger her, and she managed to win.
Wanda hit the end table hard, the picture frames on the table breaking. Glass surrounded her, as she stood on her knees so weak.
“I look at you and I don’t see a revenge-hungry, angry, or bitter girl, but instead a girl who’s hurt. A girl who had a brother, who ever since their parents’ death, would protect her from pain,” Wanda spoke through throbbing pain and tears. “And there was a time when the two fought beside the Avengers, and she told him to go get the civilians on the ships, and not to come back until the job was finished. And he did… he did the job but… he didn’t come back, and she could feel it.”
The younger Wanda looked at the image in the broken frame. It was of teenage Wanda and Pietro, they didn’t have many images but there were a few. She then looked at her reflection through the glass, her hands shaking, and tears cascaded down her face, she wasn’t the same girl anymore.
“I need him! He’s all I have…”
“He tried so hard to protect us from the pain, not knowing that his death… it was the worst pain,”
Younger Wanda sobbed, shaking trying to stand but failing.
Wanda lifted the girl’s chin to face her. “I was told… when I was mourning him, that ‘what is grief if not love persevering?’ I lost the person who told me that too, and the truth is, I’m really empty… just like you,”
“I guess it just runs in us, in every universe, we’re meant to be broken,”
Wanda swallowed. “I guess so…”
“I was just left with nothing… but my anger,” The younger Wanda got up, but collapsed again.
“I know,”
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-ThorneSeptember 5, 2023 at 11:25 am #155599@mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @euodia-vision
I have two more chapters!!!!!
And Wanda and Peter (Andrew) talking is amazing
Those two are honestly pretty similar
also you’ll catch on to how I separated the spiders XD I’m not proud of it but it works XD
Chapter 5
“Well, now my cabin is destroyed thanks to you,” Wanda stated, with a smirk.
“Sorry,” The other Wanda walked over to the kitchen.
Most of the tears were gone, but the pain wasn’t, and it was just a grief-filled silence in the cabin.
“How did you get your suit?” The younger Wanda asked. She would like to talk about anything but Pietro, or the pain.
Wanda tilted her head, trying to find the best way to explain. “When I uh… used my powers, it just happened,”
“Then where’s my suit?”
Wanda shrugged. “I don’t… know,”
Wanda had never given it much thought, she had just gotten it when fighting Steve. But her powers had grown at that time, her powers usually grew with emotion, and in her case, usually saddening and heavy emotion.
“May Parker found dead at the wreckage site, Spiderman also spotted,”
Both of the Wandas walked into the living room, seeing the news.
“Why weren’t you there,” The other Wanda turned to face her.
“I was… mad,” Wanda gasped at the scene, poor Peter. “You think Tony has made mistakes, but believe me when I say that I’m no hero either,”
“At least you admit it,” The younger Wanda looked at the news. “But still, how can I help?”
“Watch the farm, make sure no other multiverse people destroy this place or the farm,”
“Okay,”
~*~
“It’s my fault,” Peter stated, his voice so very quiet. He could see Wanda out of the corner of his eye.
“It was mine too,” Wanda took a seat next to him.
Peter turned to look at her. “How?”
“What’s that thing you say when you can do the things that I can, but you don’t, and then the bad things happen? They happen because of you.” Wanda fidgeted her hands, the place where her powers came from. “Doctor Strange asked for my help, and I said no,”
“Yeah, but with everything you-”
“Please stop, yes I know I’m broken, but I’m not the victim or the hero,”
“I should’ve let Doctor Strange send them back, she would’ve still been here,”
“And I should’ve not told him to go,”
Peter turned to face Wanda. “What?”
“Pietro, I told him to help the civilians, and not come back until they were all safe, My last word to him was go, and he listened,” Wanda looked at Peter with sorrowful eyes. “Don’t do the blaming game, it only makes things worse,”
MJ and Ned reached the building and embraced Peter in a hug.
“Peter, there’s… there’s some people here,” MJ stated.
“What?” Peter was a little confused.
Both Wanda and Peter stand up, sensing them. The two Peters land on the statue.
“Hey, wait… wait whoa!” Peter can’t hide his shock at seeing two other… him.
But Wanda wasn’t that surprised.
“Sorry about Aunt May,” Peter said with empathy. (Andrew)
“Yeah, sorry. I’ve got some understanding of what it-” (Toby)
“No, no, no… please don’t tell me that you know what I’m going through.”
“She’s gone. And it’s all my fault. She died for nothing.” Peter reached for the box that MJ was holding but she gently pulled it away. “So I’m gonna do what I should have done in the first place.”
“Peter…”
“Please, don’t! You don’t belong here, either of you. So I’m sending you home. Those other guys are from your worlds, right?”
The Peters nodded.
“So you deal with it. And if they die, if you kill them… that’s on you. It’s not my problem. I don’t care anymore. I’m done.” Peter reached for the box again, but MJ still wouldn’t hand it to him. “I’m really sorry that I dragged you into this. But you have to go home now. Good luck.”
“Peter… if you would’ve sent this back… well let’s just say I’m glad you didn’t,” Wanda stated, thinking about the other her, the broken, angry, and hurt her.
“My uncle Ben was killed. It was my fault.” (Toby) Peter stated, the pain clear in his voice.
“I lost…” Peter’s voice shook. (Andrew) “I lost Gwen. My, um… she was my MJ. I couldn’t save her. I’m never gonna be able to forgive myself for that. But I carried on, tried to, um… try to keep going, try to keep being the uh… that “Friendly Neighborhood Spider-Man,” ‘cause I knew that’s what she would have wanted. But at some point, I just– I stopped pulling my punches. I got rageful. I got bitter. I just don’t want you to end up like… like me.”
“It’s like this overwhelming pain, it hits like waves until you drown,” Wanda stated. “You already know my story,”
Peter nodded. (Andrew)
“The night Ben died, I hunted down the man who I thought did it. I wanted him dead. I got what I wanted. It didn’t make it better. It took me a long time to learn to get through that darkness.”
Peter was taken aback by their stories.
“I want to kill him. I want to tear him apart. I can still hear her voice in my head. Even after she was hurt, she said to me that we did the right thing. She told me that, “With great power–”
“Comes great responsibility.” The three said in unison, all shocked that the other Peters knew that line.
“How do you know that?” Peter (Tom) asked pointing at the two.
The two shared a look. “Uncle Ben said it, the day he died,”
Three Spidermans, all connected, by loss, pain, but also bravery.
Chapter 6
“Okay so, uh… Connors, Marko, Dillon, and um…” Peter stopped to look at the cure for Goblin. “Uh, look, I think that I can repair the devices for Dillon and Marko, but the others-”
“Oh, I got Connors. I’ve already cured him once, so no big deal.” Peter seemed a little too arrogant, and looking around he could see that the others were questionable. “What? It’s no big deal,”
“Great,” Peter nodded. (Toby)
“Yeah that’s great,” Peter acknowledged.
“Think I can make an anti-serum for Dr. Osborn. Been thinking about it for a long time.” Peter (Toby) stopped to see the other’s Peter (Tom) conflicted emotions. “We gotta cure all of them right?”
“Right.”
“Cause that’s what we do,”
All of them get to work, but Peter stops to notice MJ staring at him. “What?”
“Just… three yous,” MJ smirked.
~*~
“So… are you like a girl Spiderman or something?” Peter (Andrew) asked looking at Wanda, who was standing in the corner feeling useless.
“Uh… no, I’m Wanda Maximoff, and… I don’t really have a code name.”
“And your ability is…”
“Complicated,”
“Backstory?”
Wanda paused, slipping her hands into her pockets. “I had to blow a hole through the man I loved and it meant nothing…”
Peter looked at her, trying to process what on earth that meant.
“Sorry… I’ve just been needing to say that for a while,” Wanda sighed. “My backstory is a nightmare, I have lost almost everyone including myself,”
“You seem alright to me,” Peter shrugged.
“Yeah… I think I’m slowly coming back,” Wanda smiled.
Ned rolled over in his chair to the two. Peter (Toby) also sitting over there.
“So, do you have a best friend too?” Ned asked.
“I did,” Peter (Toby) still focused on his work.
“Did?”
“He died in my arms after he tried to kill me,” Peter (Toby) turned to look at Ned. “It was heartbreaking,”
~*~
Wanda and Peter (Andrew) watched a touching scene between MJ and Peter.
But neither seemed to be that happy.
“It’s hard, when you’re young there’s always a part of you that wants to be in love, but when they die-” Wanda stopped herself.
“Then you’re just longing for them,” Peter finished.
“We had our whole lives planned out,”
“Just to lose it all…”
The two shared a look of guilt, grief, and finally pain.
“What was he like?”
Wanda swallowed. “He was my hope, he was perfect, so perfect he was willing to sacrifice himself for the greater good,”
“She was my everything, my joy,” Peter (Andrew) Stated.
“And now, they’re just our sadness,” Wanda finished, wiping away a few tears from her eyes.
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-ThorneSeptember 5, 2023 at 2:40 pm #155633@smiley nice!!
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.
September 11, 2023 at 12:34 pm #156062AWWWWWWWWWW! (NEW SHIP ALERT!!!! XD)
I LOVE THIS MILEY!!!! No Way Home WITH Wanda is amazing
I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child
September 11, 2023 at 1:17 pm #156073Isn’t it?! This is way better than Multiverse of Madness XD
and Peter and her reminiscing about their loves is so sweet and sad
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