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July 22, 2023 at 2:18 pm #151873
@keilah-h @euodia-vision @hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @anyone-else
*coughs* who’s shocked? I mean really, who is shocked?
*silence*
okay… fine no one is surprised
but you may be surprised by the story
because…
*cries*
Wanda is the villain
This started because of a conversation I had with Keilah
and how Wanda is a very empathetic villain in the new movies, but most of us haven’t seen the new movies (partly because they’re so dark)
and I’ve been trying to come up for a while on how WandaVision could happen without the dark magic, and I finally figured it out
so I already showed the prologue to Keilah but here it is
and I’m open to ideas
this takes place like a few days after Tony’s funeral but before the stones are returned
Prologue
S.W.O.R.D. Head Quarters
“Wanda stop!” Steve shouted, entering the room. “The stones were missing, and I know you took them,”
“It’s too late Steve,” Wanda still looked at Vision’s faded body laying on the table in front of her. “This my way to be happy.”
Steve watched as Wanda brought the Mind Stone close to Vision.
“I can’t let you,” Steve tossed his shield at Wanda, trying to stop her.
Wanda used her powers to stop Steve’s shield, it hovered above the ground. Wanda looked at Steve, and tilted her head, ever so slightly. “Don’t make me a villain Steve,” Wanda dropped Steve’s shield to the ground.
“Those stones need to be returned,” Steve demanded. He calmed his voice and took a few steps closer to Wanda. “Give me the stones, I know you don’t want people to be hurt, you’re better than this,”
“Why? So you can go be with Peggy?”
Steve sighed. “Wand-”
“Don’t act like it’s hard to be moral, not for you, when you return the stones you get everything, and I’m still left with nothing,”
“Wanda be reasonable,”
Wanda’s eyes glowed bright red, she lift herself into the air. Her outfit changed into a suit. A headband wrapped around her hair, and she looked at Steve. “This is me being reasonable,”
Steve looked at the new Wanda in front of him. “I don’t want to fight you,”
“Neither do I,” Wanda raised her hands up, her powers wrapping around them. “But you got in my way,”
Steve felt the blast from her powers. He let out a scream of pain, and suddenly he was back at the destroyed Avengers’ building.
Wanda had won, and Steve was having trouble hating her.
From here Wanda is going to use the reality stone to make a house and give herself a family with Vision, but the stones still need returning so we’re going to see some of the Avengers figure out how to stop her, without hurting her or the stones
but this story is going to be a lot like WandaVision in some ways
(note this story, will be a sad one, especially because there’s much more to the story)
but there is nothing dark or bad in it
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-ThorneJuly 22, 2023 at 3:16 pm #151874Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley No one is shocked, Miley…nobody
😂😂
jkjk, but seriously…you and me can’t seem to stop XXD
ANYWHOOOOOO
I LOVE IT SO FAR!!!!!!!
Wanda 😭
July 22, 2023 at 3:22 pm #151877@freedomwriter76
What?! I thought everyone would be XD
jkjk, but seriously…you and me can’t seem to stop XXD
XD so true, I was in the car for like six hours and I had a lot of time to think XD
Aw thanks (Wanda is still a better hero, though)
it’s going to get so much worse for her
and it ends so sadly
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-ThorneJuly 22, 2023 at 3:31 pm #151878Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley You’re welcome 💖💖
What?! I thought everyone would be XD
Not one bit 😂😂
XD so true, I was in the car for like six hours and I had a lot of time to think XD
wellll….I guess you have to find something fun to do XXD
it’s going to get so much worse for her
and it ends so sadly
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
July 22, 2023 at 5:14 pm #151888@keilah-h @euodia-vision @hybridlore @freedomwriter76
I have the first two chapters
Chapter 1
“What’s today?” Wanda gestured to the heart on the calendar, circling today’s date. She then looked at her husband.
“I’m not sure, I have no memory of it,” Vision tilted his head just slightly, trying to remember. “I never forget anything,”
“My husband and his artificial brain,” Wanda said with a laugh. “Is it our anniversary?”
Vision gave a confused look. “I can’t recall when that was…”
“You know, I can’t either,”
They both went silent.
Billy and Tommy interrupted the moment by bolting down the stairs.
“I’m hungry, what’s for breakfast?” Tommy asked walking into the kitchen.
Wanda smiled at her sons and used her powers to set a plate of pancakes on the table. “Pancakes,”
The boys both brightened with excitement, quickly taking a seat at the table.
Vision smiled at Wanda and then took a seat.
Wanda look around the kitchen, there were dishes that needed to be washed and ingredients that need put back, but looking at her family, she decided she would do them later.
She took a seat at the table and smiled at her husband and kids.
She loved this crazy family of hers, and she couldn’t imagine her life without them.
Wanda look at her son Tommy, who was putting lots of whipped cream on his pancake. “Don’t you want a pancake with that whipped cream?” Wanda asked with a laugh.
Tommy continued to put whipped cream on the pancake. “The way I see it, the pancake is just the plate for the whipped cream,”
Billy looked at his twin brother. “Then what’s the plate underneath it for?”
“I think more room for more whipped cream,”
Everyone at the table laughed.
Tommy was usually the mischievous one, whereas Billy was the tame and quiet one. But both were sweet kids, who cared for each other, and their family.
~*~
“We’re going to be in a talent show!” Tommy announced as he and Billy came through the front door.
Wanda turned from the sink to look at the boys. “What talent show?”
“This one,” Billy handed her a poster.
“Westview talent show,” Wanda read the poster out loud. “Winners get a hundred dollar cash prize,”
“Cool isn’t it?” Tommy said looking at his mother.
“Very cool, but uh… what’s your guys’ talent?”
“Well we both have ideas,” Tommy said.
“Mine is-”
“Mine is way cooler than yours,” Tommy cut his brother off.
“Tommy hear your brother’s idea, it might be a good one,” Wanda stated sternly.
“Alright fine,” Tommy rolled his eyes but got a look from Wanda.
“Well, it starts with flaming hoops,”
“Nope,” Wanda interrupted.
“You just told him to hear me out,” Billy cried.
“I didn’t realize your lives were at risk,” Wanda put her hands on her hips.
“I vote we sing,” Tommy suggested. “Or we dance,”
“Those sound lame,”
“Why don’t you guys do a magic show?” Wanda said with a bright smile to her boys.
“Yeah!” Billy and Tommy both screamed at the same time.
“How are you planning to spend the money?”
“Duh, a tv for our room,” Tommy stated like it was obvious.
“No way, I vote we buy action figures,”
“And that’s why I’m the cooler twin,” Tommy smirked.
“Whatever,” Billy rolled his eyes at the comment and ran up the stairs. Tommy was right behind him.
Wanda smiled as her boys left the room, they were sweet, mischievous, and crazy all at the same time.
“I promise as long as I’m here, no harm will ever come to you two,” Wanda whispered to herself.
Chapter 2
“So what’s going on?” Steve asked looking at the S.W.O.R.D. agent in the chair. Both looking at the screen in front of them.
They had hooked up a few cameras to monitor what was happening in Wanda’s little town of Westview.
“Well… in the past few days, Wanda has used the stones to make a whole town,” the agent replied.
“Who are the people?” Clint asked taking a few steps closer.
“Holograms basically, made from the stones,”
“And her kids?”
“Think like mini Visions, made from the reality stone and mind stone, they started as toddlers, but in three days they’ve grown to ten years old,”
“She built a dream reality,” Steve whispered. This was why Wanda wanted all the stones.
“Why haven’t we sent a missile in there yet,” Everyone in the room turned to see a tall, and lurking man.
“That would put her life at risk, not to mention there would be a risk of explosion with the stones,” Clint stated.
Clint and Steve looked at each other. Neither one necessarily blamed Wanda, and they refuse to put her in harm’s way.
“Who are you?” Steve asked looking at the man.
“The head director of S.W.O.R.D., Hayward,” He looked at the screen. “And the way I see it, Wanda is a terrorist,”
“No one is being hurt,” Clint argued.
“Those stones need to be returned to their proper timeline, or the universe as we know it could get terribly damaged,”
“Still, Wanda isn’t going to hurt people,” Clint continued to protest.
“Really, didn’t she use the space stone on Steve?” Hayward said stepping closer to Clint.
“It was complicated,” Steve retorted.
“Look you guys are heroes and you did a noble thing, bringing everyone back, but other heroes only care about themselves,”
Hayward gestured to the footage of Wanda on the screen.
“That’s not fair, she lost everything,” Clint argued.
“Noted,” Hayward said with a scowl.
Steve turned back to the computer guy. “How can someone get in there?”
“Well… she’s using the stones to build a force field around the area built by the stones, if you enter, you’ll probably be forced to play a part, in her show,”
“Show?” Clint raised an eyebrow.
“Yeah, since the whole thing is laid out like a show almost, I call it WandaVision,” The guy said with a proud face.
“I see…” Clint nodded his head and then grinned at Steve.
“How’s it going?” Bucky asked entering the room. Peter was following behind him.
They were currently in the S.W.O.R.D. tent outside of the force field.
“Pretty good, but Peter you should get back to… regular life,” Steve stated.
“Yeah… but Wanda is an Avenger, we couldn’t have won without her, I want to help in any way possible,” Peter stated.
Everyone looked around the room.
“Yeah, she is,” Steve stated, and then look at the computer guy. “I still want in there,”
The man nodded. “We’ll start preparing,”
Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 22, 2023 at 5:15 pm #151889@euodia-vision @hybridlore @freedomwriter76
*points to chapters above*
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-ThorneJuly 22, 2023 at 5:24 pm #151890Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley love it!!! 💕💕💕
I love how Clint and Steve want to stop her, but also want to help her 😭🥰
This Hayward dude…😅😤😠
July 22, 2023 at 5:30 pm #151891@freedomwriter76
Aww, thanks!!
Yeah it’s an interesting dynamic, and it shows how strong the Avengers are, especially for Clint and Steve because Wanda was on their side during civil war
and Peter’s comment (he’s the best)
yeah… he’s the worst, and it gets even worse as the book progresses
honestly this is a fav fanfic right now, because I get to write Billy and Tommy and they’re adorable, but there’s also a lot of action which is fun to write
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-ThorneJuly 22, 2023 at 5:55 pm #151898Nope, not surprised at all 😅🤣🤣
I think I would only be surprised if you stopped making fanfics, at this point XD
It’s so sad, though 😭😭
I love how Clint and Steve want to stop her, but also want to help her 😭🥰
Me too!!!
it’s going to get so much worse for her
and it ends so sadly
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
"Be careful, for writing books is endless, and much study wears you out." Eccl. 12:12
July 22, 2023 at 5:58 pm #151899XD That shouldn’t happen anytime soon
I know, and I’m sorry
just prepare yourself
XD I already have an idea for the second one
so it’s at least a two-part series
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-ThorneJuly 22, 2023 at 6:59 pm #151904@freedomwriter76 @hybridlore
Ahem
I made boards for Wanda and her family… *cries*
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-ThorneJuly 22, 2023 at 6:59 pm #151905Do me a favor…. Tell Cress I meant it
-ThorneJuly 22, 2023 at 7:00 pm #151906July 22, 2023 at 7:52 pm #151908Anonymous- Rank: Chosen One
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@smiley sadness 😭😭
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