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  • #16756
    Sarah Hoven
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      @bluejay Have you ever tried writing poetry from a vocabulary list? I had to once, and it was more fun than I thought. Here’s the result:

      A Tale From Two Views
      View One: The Tragic End To A Shrimp
      A shrimp was lodged upon a ship
      Which bombed the rival airstrip
      He heard the bullets bang and zip
      As bombers turned the gay flagship
      Into a blazing starship
      And that’s what we call popcorn shrimp.

      View Two: History Records…
      The mighty Moorish corsair
      Entered into warfare
      With Great Britain’s ire
      The British sent their airfare
      T’was backed by many a prayer
      And blew the mighty corsair into air.

      The disadvantage of vocabulary list poetry is that some of the lines are decidedly unpoetic. But it does force you to get creative. 🙂

      #16761
      BlueJay
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        @sarah-h Where do you get the vocabulary lists from?

        #16768
        Sarah Hoven
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          @bluejay I really don’t remember; it was from some homeschool assignment a few years ago.

          #16769
          BlueJay
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            @sarah-h Can you give me a list yourself then?

            #16773
            Sarah Hoven
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              @bluejay I could post my brother’s lists from his grammar book, if you want. They wouldn’t be the same as the one I used, but I guess that wouldn’t matter. They’re around 20 words long, I think, but I could post them in 5 or 10 word segments if that’s too long. I guess it depends on how long you want the poem to be. 🙂

              #16774
              BlueJay
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                Post them all and I’ll use what I can @sarah-h

                #16777
                Sarah Hoven
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                  @bluejay Great! It’s almost 3a.m. here now, so I’ll do it tomorrow. I mean, later today, after I go to sleep and wake up. I look forward to seeing what you come up with! 🙂

                  #16778
                  BlueJay
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                    @sarah-h 3AM???? How do you manage to stay awake???? It’s almost 8pm here, so I’m off to bed soon too. 🙂

                    #16781
                    Sarah Hoven
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                      @bluejay Haha! For once we’ll be going to bed at around the same time. 🙂 And I don’t usually stay up this late; tonight is very unusual.

                      #16823
                      Sarah Hoven
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                        @bluejay Okay, here goes…

                        Emergency
                        Meteorologist
                        Volunteer
                        Victim
                        Distributed
                        Frequently
                        Electricity
                        Personally
                        Bodily
                        Procedure
                        Indicative
                        Imperative
                        Subjunctive
                        Declarative
                        Interrogative
                        Exclamatory
                        Exclamation
                        Interjection
                        opportunities
                        Assignment
                        Satisfactorily
                        Catalogue
                        Librarian
                        Hyphenate

                        That one had a lot of grammar terms in it, so I’ll post the next one too:

                        Conterminous
                        Curriculum
                        Advantageous
                        Parliamentary
                        Redundancy
                        Pistole
                        Preen
                        Cud
                        Obscure
                        Mettle
                        Expedite
                        Sprinter
                        Doubloon
                        Academic
                        Molting
                        Milestone
                        Conjugate
                        Constituent
                        Ambassador
                        Collegiate

                        Here’s one that looks more promising:

                        Gregarious
                        Rampageous
                        Tenacious
                        Vacuous
                        Capricious
                        Ambiguous
                        Ostentatious
                        Calculable
                        Amicable
                        Breathy
                        Indigenously
                        Symmetrically
                        Biannually
                        Erroneously
                        Biennially
                        Unwieldily
                        Inanimate
                        Lethargic
                        Prolific
                        Domestic
                        Loutish

                        Have fun! 🙂

                        #16834
                        BlueJay
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                          @sarah-h Thank you. I’ll see what I can do. 🙂

                          #17589
                          Sarah Hoven
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                            @bluejay Have you tried this kind yet? I wish I could have found lists with better words in them; the first two look pretty hopeless.

                            #17590
                            BlueJay
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                              @sarah-h I actually forgot about these lists. I’ll look at them tonight. (I was wondering what I’d be doing) Thanks for reminding me. Will you be around for writing in an hour and a half???

                              #17593
                              Sarah Hoven
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                                @bluejay I’ll be asleep by then. 🙂 I really want to write some more soon; it’s been getting harder to find a time when my brothers aren’t using all the electronics (I think that’s the wrong word for it, but oh well). Hopefully tomorrow I’ll be able to write some. 🙂

                                #17598
                                BlueJay
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                                  @sarah-h 🙁 Oh well. I’m sure we will make contact again. 🙂

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