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@keilah-h You’re good! XD
🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰
Sorry for the late feedback, but WOW. I know next to nothing about these characters, but I could feel their grief like a punch in the gut. Very effective. Good job! 👍
I haven’t yet had to write the death of any of my MCs, but when I do I think I will need a tissue fort too.
We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good on, eh?
-The Doctor
@e-m-trepke Thanks! Yep, I cried for like 10 minutes when I made up that part of the story……
Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.