A scene I NEVER saw coming……

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  • September 17, 2022 at 4:01 pm #117682
    Queen_of_Alvastia
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      @keilah-h You’re good! XD

      🥰#TorrynVelgardProtectionSquad🥰

      September 28, 2022 at 8:23 pm #118458
      E. M. Trepke
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        Sorry for the late feedback, but WOW. I know next to nothing about these characters, but I could feel their grief like a punch in the gut. Very effective. Good job! 👍

        I haven’t yet had to write the death of any of my MCs, but when I do I think I will need a tissue fort too.

        We're all stories in the end. Just make it a good on, eh?
        -The Doctor

        October 3, 2022 at 1:11 pm #118598
        Keilah H.
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          @e-m-trepke Thanks! Yep, I cried for like 10 minutes when I made up that part of the story……

          Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

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