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@emma-flournoy Here’s another option.
When your fate overwhelms you, where can you turn?
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@kate-flournoy @his-instrument @graciegirl @hope @winter-rose Wanted to see if there were any last thoughts on this.
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@Daeus *emerges from dark library blowing dust from her hair and wiping her hands* I’m sorry, I’ve been horribly remiss in keeping up with things.
I love ‘When fate seeks to destroy you, where can you turn?’ Like, really really love it. Lovely. Go for it.
*vanishes in piles of dusty scrolls again*
@kate-flournoy *puts on black cape* It shall be done!
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@daeus love the ‘When fate seeks to destroy you, where can you turn?’ hook. Much better than the others. 😉
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@daeus Sorry it took me forever. 🙂 I like the second synopsis, and the “When fate seeks to destroy you, where can you turn?” line. I kinda think that both synopsis thingys (What is the plural of synopsis?) could be more specific, but I don’t have much experience with writing such things so perhaps it is supposed to be that way. If so ignore me. 🙂
@Daeus Yuppo, the former. When fate seeks to destroy you.
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