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I stretch and yawn and run about I’m small and cute to see, I love to leave my small footprints wherever you have cleaned.
I sit and cuddle in your lap when I think it’s convenient, I know that I must be the best ‘cause to me you’re very lenient.
And when you are angry with me, I’m bashful on the spot, no one could ever keep a grudge against such a little tot.
yay poetry
Haha! This is definitely a cat. (I just read this with my cat walking over my lap to sit on the desk and stare at me.)
Where do your poem lines end in each stanza?
First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
Fork the Gork
Yes the poem is called A Kitten.😊
If you’re referring to where to pause in each paragraph that would be where the commas are.
hope that’s what you were looking for.
@charityanna
That was so cute! And definitely a cat, you got it spot on 😂😁
So sweet! Nailed it.
"All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - Gandalf
Thank you!