A kitten

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  • January 11, 2023 at 3:41 pm #128818
    Folith-Feolin
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      @charityanne

      yay poetry

      January 11, 2023 at 3:42 pm #128819
      Koshka
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        @charityanne

        Haha! This is definitely a cat. (I just read this with my cat walking over my lap to sit on the desk and stare at me.)

        Where do your poem lines end in each stanza?

        First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
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        January 11, 2023 at 5:16 pm #128835
        Esther
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          @charityanne

          Cute!

          Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

          January 11, 2023 at 6:22 pm #128846
          Charityanne
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            @koshka

            Yes the poem is called A Kitten.😊

            If you’re referring to where to pause in each paragraph that would be where the commas are.

            hope that’s what you were looking for.

            January 11, 2023 at 8:06 pm #128852
            TheLoonyOne
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              @charityanna

              That was so cute! And definitely a cat, you got it spot on 😂😁

              January 11, 2023 at 10:56 pm #128889
              Charityanne
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                @theloonyone

                thanks!

                Yes the poem is called The Kitten😄

                 

                January 12, 2023 at 5:06 pm #128959
                Elanor
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                  @charityanne

                  So sweet! Nailed it.

                  "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - Gandalf

                  January 12, 2023 at 5:31 pm #128962
                  Charityanne
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                    @elanor

                    Thank you!

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