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August 16, 2017 at 11:17 am #40947
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Yeah! I totally get that. I got my lighthouse story idea all of a sudden but then I couldn’t remember the plot I had had in mind. 😛
August 16, 2017 at 11:17 am #40948Anonymous
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August 16, 2017 at 11:18 am #40949@emily yeah I think I had a second wind and by the time I was done writing I was conked out. But I normally write fast. 😀 I’m thinking about making a series of allegorical stories like that, whata ya think?
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August 16, 2017 at 11:20 am #40950Anonymous
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@salome01w4g I think that would be a neat idea. I, for one, would totally read them.
August 16, 2017 at 11:23 am #40951@emily it would be a good way to post more interesting stuff on my/our family blog. 😛 😉
I know my family (extended, would probably read it)~I don’t know what I’m doing~
August 16, 2017 at 11:24 am #40952Anonymous
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@salome01w4g I would too.
August 16, 2017 at 11:26 am #40953@emily I better start outlining some ideas then! Oh I’m so glad I found KP!!!
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August 16, 2017 at 11:26 am #40954@emily oops I forgot to ask, whata ya think if I did a different character for each story?
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August 16, 2017 at 11:28 am #40955Anonymous
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Definitely @salome01w4g. Yeah, I am glad that I found it too. I didn’t know that there were SO many christian teens out there who love writing too. It is sooo great.
August 16, 2017 at 11:30 am #40956Anonymous
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@salome01w4g Hmmm…I think that I would choose different characters. That would make it real interesting. Like some of the characters might not trust God and almost give in to Satan.
August 16, 2017 at 11:32 am #40957@emily yeah that would be a good idea. maybe somehow all intertwine it all in the end.
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August 16, 2017 at 11:42 am #40958Anonymous
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@salome01w4g That would be cool 😀
August 16, 2017 at 2:22 pm #40963@emily I had one more question would it be a bad idea to alternate from 1st, to 2nd person every other story??
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