A child victorious

[Hannah]

@daeus or @aratrea If I post my short story on my blog can post the link here for people to see and give feed back? Thanks!

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Daeus]

@salome01w4g Yes.

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[Hannah]

okie-dokie, thanks! @daeus I’ll try to post the link a little later

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Hannah]

https://regeneratelifefarm.blogspot.com/2017/08/a-child-victorious.html

@catwing @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @his-instrument @daeus and anyone else who sees this 😀 I wrote this short story (my first actually!!!! 🙂 ) last night and would like any feed back your willing to give. Thanks! ~

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[CK4always]

@Hannah I wanna read it!!! So I’m going to 😛 And I’m gonna give you my feedback 🙂

[Hannah]

@CK4always okay! Thanks! can’t wait to hear what you think! I’m super nervous because it’s the first time I’ve put my writing out for everyone to see…. :O :/ 😛

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Anonymous]

Your story is GREAT @salome01w4g! I love it soooo much! It is very creative.

[Hannah]

@emily thanks! It’s a bit allegorical so I wasn’t sure about it. 🙂

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Anonymous]

@salome01w4g I like the allegory you included. I think that your descriptions of Satan and Jesus Christ were very well done.

[Anonymous]

@salome01w4g How long did it take you to write that?

[Hannah]

@emily thank you, my goal was to be different and well done. 🙂

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Anonymous]

@salome01w4g I think that you succeeded. And I like the name 😉

[Hannah]

@emily eh…. from about 10:30 – 10:45 or 11 (at night… why do I always get ideas at night??)
I edited it some when I typed it up (I had written it all on paper) so it is better than what I my tired brain said. 😀

~I don’t know what I’m doing~

[Hannah]

@emily thanks, I kinda came up with it on the fly (like when I started this thread)

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[Anonymous]

@salome01w4g Haha! Quick writing!

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