1st Chapter Critique for The Inventor’s Daughter

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    Mary G
    @maryg3
      • Rank: Wise Jester
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      Hi all,

      I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reading the first chapter of The Inventor’s Daughter! This is my first time asking for a critique so it’s pretty exciting! Let me know and I can share it by email. I would like it to be read before Friday afternoon if not that’s ok!

      God bless!

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      #104103
      Jodi Maile
      @jodi-maile
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        @maryg3 Ooh that’s so exciting! I’d love to read it. My email is jodiwrites21@gmail.com 🙂

        #104104
        Anonymous
          • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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          @maryg3

          ME ME ME!!! I totally wanna read it! Unfortunately though, I probably could not get done by Friday because I’m pretty busy doing stuff with my school. I still would love to read it. My email is discipleshipwithjoy@gmail.com. But if you can’t send it over, I totally understand. Deadlines are pressing. 🙂

          #104105
          Daisy Torres
          @daisy-torres
            • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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            @maryg3 Aww, congrats on your first critique request! I’d love to volunteer! My email is authordaisytorres.1@gmail.com

            "It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."

            #104109
            Anatra
            @anatra23
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              @maryg3

              Ooh, this is exiting! I have the time and I’d love to read it! Here’s my email: AnatraBreathesBooks@gmail.com

              #104113
              Natalie C.
              @nanisnook
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                @maryg3

                Ooh I want to read it!! I think I can get it done by Friday. I love your title by the way. My email is nanisnook@att.net

                Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10

                #104116
                Natalie C.
                @nanisnook
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                  @maryg3

                  Do you want me to share comments on here or by email?

                  Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10

                  #104122
                  Mary G
                  @maryg3
                    • Rank: Wise Jester
                    • Total Posts: 90

                    @nanisnook

                    By email would be great!! Thanks!

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                    #104123
                    Mary G
                    @maryg3
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                      • Total Posts: 90

                      I forgot to mention that my book is a Christian fiction novel, about finding God and her true family! Like a conversion/coming of age book!;)

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                      #104124
                      Natalie C.
                      @nanisnook
                        • Rank: Loyal Sidekick
                        • Total Posts: 154

                        @maryg3 Okay! Will do

                        Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10

                        #104125
                        Keilah H.
                        @keilah-h
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                          I would love to do it! The only issue is about the email thing. I’ve only told my email address to a select few, very trusted friends, and I honestly don’t trust people I don’t know very well in real life. (Not that I don’t trust you, but I don’t want to get into the habit of giving personal information out to others online). Is there some other way to do it?

                          Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                          #104135
                          Lydia S.
                          @lydia-s
                            • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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                            @maryg3

                            Oh, how exciting!!! I wish I could, but I don’t think I’d be able to get it read in time. 🙁 I wish you the best, though! Go get ’em! 🙂

                            #104143
                            Mary G
                            @maryg3
                              • Rank: Wise Jester
                              • Total Posts: 90

                              @lydia-s

                              No worries! Thanks! But if you still want to read it after Friday I’m fine with that too:)

                               

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                              #104144
                              Mary G
                              @maryg3
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                                @keilah-h

                                Oh I totally understand!! That’s ok!:) I don’t think these another way! A least not that I know of!🤷‍♀️

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                                #104146
                                Linyang Zhang
                                @devastate-lasting
                                  • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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                                  @maryg3 Hey, awesome! I’d love to read it, but unfortunately I don’t like putting my email out in public places. Could you perhaps make a Google form or something for us to input our emails into? That’s what I would do, anyways.

                                  Lately, it's been on my brain
                                  Would you mind letting me know
                                  If hours don't turn into days

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