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September 1, 2021 at 9:59 pm #104101
Hi all,
I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reading the first chapter of The Inventor’s Daughter! This is my first time asking for a critique so it’s pretty exciting! Let me know and I can share it by email. I would like it to be read before Friday afternoon if not that’s ok!
God bless!
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September 1, 2021 at 11:23 pm #104103@maryg3 Ooh that’s so exciting! I’d love to read it. My email is jodiwrites21@gmail.com 🙂
September 1, 2021 at 11:43 pm #104104Anonymous- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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ME ME ME!!! I totally wanna read it! Unfortunately though, I probably could not get done by Friday because I’m pretty busy doing stuff with my school. I still would love to read it. My email is discipleshipwithjoy@gmail.com. But if you can’t send it over, I totally understand. Deadlines are pressing. 🙂
September 1, 2021 at 11:44 pm #104105@maryg3 Aww, congrats on your first critique request! I’d love to volunteer! My email is authordaisytorres.1@gmail.com
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
September 2, 2021 at 12:42 pm #104109Ooh, this is exiting! I have the time and I’d love to read it! Here’s my email: AnatraBreathesBooks@gmail.com
September 2, 2021 at 2:27 pm #104113Ooh I want to read it!! I think I can get it done by Friday. I love your title by the way. My email is nanisnook@att.net
Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10
September 2, 2021 at 3:48 pm #104116Do you want me to share comments on here or by email?
Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10
September 2, 2021 at 4:15 pm #104122By email would be great!! Thanks!
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September 2, 2021 at 4:17 pm #104123I forgot to mention that my book is a Christian fiction novel, about finding God and her true family! Like a conversion/coming of age book!;)
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September 2, 2021 at 4:25 pm #104124@maryg3 Okay! Will do
Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10
September 2, 2021 at 5:05 pm #104125I would love to do it! The only issue is about the email thing. I’ve only told my email address to a select few, very trusted friends, and I honestly don’t trust people I don’t know very well in real life. (Not that I don’t trust you, but I don’t want to get into the habit of giving personal information out to others online). Is there some other way to do it?
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September 2, 2021 at 8:30 pm #104135Oh, how exciting!!! I wish I could, but I don’t think I’d be able to get it read in time. 🙁 I wish you the best, though! Go get ’em! 🙂
September 2, 2021 at 11:43 pm #104143No worries! Thanks! But if you still want to read it after Friday I’m fine with that too:)
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September 2, 2021 at 11:45 pm #104144Oh I totally understand!! That’s ok!:) I don’t think these another way! A least not that I know of!🤷♀️
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September 3, 2021 at 7:22 am #104146@maryg3 Hey, awesome! I’d love to read it, but unfortunately I don’t like putting my email out in public places. Could you perhaps make a Google form or something for us to input our emails into? That’s what I would do, anyways.
Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
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