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@savannah_grace2009
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    @thearcaneaxiom

    I like your idea of that the magic words are evil because of the purpose given by the Pythonos. So I might use that? I’m still not sure, haha!

    Names of people:

    Ottoline, Marcurious, Sparrow, Rishona, Berko, Sef, Lilitu, Neveah,  Azuri, Nathan (but he doesn’t count as an Andromedan name cuz he’s human!) Azazel, Indie, Jordan (I need a new name for him, an evil one, so if you could help that would be great!), Selena, Kratos, Cassian, Iver. There will probably be more but I’m not sure at this point as I’m a “pantser” not a plotter, though I’ve made a very sloppy outline.

    Names of places/waterways/lakes/oceans/towns:

    Places:

    Folgerian Mountains, New Andromeda, Alrynin Peninsula, Erstonia, Candia Isles, Indigo Island, Painted Hills (I need a better name for this as well), Alaski Mountains

    Waterways/oceans/lakes: 

    Putvista Delta, Teardrop Lake (needs a better name), Cerulean Sea, Mezmerizing Deep (also needs a better name), Gostall Ocean, Great Folgerian Lake, Worgrand Bay, Centralian Sea, Nordvick Strait, Lake Biske, Farnbron Brook, Farnbtron Lake, Gray River (needs better name, it’s so plain!),  Arline River, Beau Brook Gulf, Osceola Sea, Jolgough Ocean., and my favorite: the Infernal Domain.

    Towns: 

    Putvista, Pitt, Alrynd, Aquino, Acomb, Caufall, Azer, Caister, Tywardreath, Pandef, Pythonos, Estrello, Tenby, Lir. As you can tell, I need a LOT more names for towns!

    Dark Magic spells:

    Dissaros: used to open, close, unlock. lock, move any object. Is not effective on anything alive.

    Scisto: To stop. Can be used to stop anything from moving. When directed at different parts of the body, it can stop a heart from beating, lungs from breathing, or with great training and strength, signals from coming from the brain. Very dangerous spell.

    Mal de immunos calumangan: This cursed phrase is the words used by Rishona to open the portal, setting off the crumble of Elysium. Sometimes used as “cuss words”, it is said to be cursed and used to curse people, places or just when people get mad!

    ***since no one but the Pythonos and witches here and there can use magic unless being taught how, some magic words are used as swear words. But I haven’t made up any of these “swear words” yet. Please help, haha!***

    Sorry this list is so long and chaotic! As you can tell I need MAJOR help with making my names of places creative yet realistic and with languages. I am so happy you’re willing to help me out! Thank you so much!!!!! 🙂

     

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