By Christianna Hellwig
Upon a windy slope of sand
I saw a wizened preacher stand,
And all his parched, cracked lips could form,
Amidst that gust from taunting storm,
Three words were those he said to me,
“All is vanity.”
His words like sighs were borne away
With rays of the departing day,
While all my life, that morbid call
Sank through my fingers to its pall,
When with a wail he said to me,
“All is vanity.”
With chilling dread I left that place
Whence crumbled hope before my face,
But hauntingly they followed me,
Three words which never set me free,
Since with a sigh he said to me,
“All is vanity.”
’Twas while embittered with my loss,
I came upon a wretched cross,
Where hung my life, all empty shrouds
Upon a man midst umbra clouds,
Yet still with love He said to me,
“Naught is vanity.”
A long-stopped stream within my heart
Was at these words released in part,
As innocent He bore my pain
That I might live for greater gain,
While in His grace He said to me,
“Naught is vanity.”
The wind yet blows along that strand,
With chilling dread still stirs the sand,
But now for me its chill removed,
As life for Him I truly loved,
Since He afflicted said to me,
“Naught is vanity.”
Christianna is a Christian music student who teaches violin and sings constantly. She loves poetry and the classics dearly and dabbles in writing on the side. When not singing, writing, or reading, she is dancing, contemplating the meaning of life, or trying to find ways in which she can add value to other people’s lives through her own.
Great job, Christianna. I love Ecclesiastes and you captured it well with a lot of soul.
This is beautifully written, Christianna! I’m adding it to my list of favorite poems here at KP. I love the old style language, and you still made it flow like any other conversation. Excellent job! Keep writing!!!
Gorgeous poem Christianna! It flows so beautifully I really enjoyed reading it. I hope to see more of your work here at Kingdom Pen!
I love this! It’s basically the entirety of Ecclesiastes portrayed in two pictures. Great work. 😀
Thanks everyone so much. I can hardly believe something I wrote is actually on here and so glad it could bless you all. 🙂
This is beautiful, Christianna! What a wonderful way to connect this sad conclusion of Ecclesiastes with the joyful solution of Christ. I will never think of Ecclesiastes the same way again. It has fresh meaning for me now. 🙂