Oh beloved, Don’t you know that love comes from God alone? You might feel happiness without him But is it real joy? Sin wreaks havoc in our lives. It tempts us, It draws us in, It is like the song of the siren who lures sailors to their death. It sounds so beautiful. So perfect. So lovely. But it only causes pain, and such loneliness. Despair. Misery. Shame. Oh beloved, Your shoulders slump and your head hangs low. You know there is nothing you can do. How can you repay those you have hurt? Won’t good deeds make up for everything? Will that be enough? But even the best thing we can do is tainted with our sin. Nothing you do on your own can repay this sin. But God, The two most beautiful words in the Bible. He sent his son, He poured out his blood. His perfect blood. He had never once sinned. He was the unblemished sacrifice. He was Crushed. Beaten. His body mutilated. He died. Oh beloved, Don’t cry. Don’t you know what happens next? He rose from the tomb that held him for three days. Through his spilled blood we can be forgiven. He died so we might live, This is what love looks like. Oh darling, I see how you weep, I feel your pain. You don’t believe that you could ever be forgiven You are Ashamed. Hurting. Aching. My dear one, You are closer to salvation than you know. It is here you can find redemption. Find him, my beloved. Hear him calling you. Open your heart. Find the One who has loved you from the start. So come. For this is what love looks like.
Wow Christi, so amazing! I legit got shivers while reading it. 🙂
I’m glad you liked it, thanks for reading, Jane.
Great job Christi!!!! Summed up why we look forward to Easter and it’s significant. Thank you for writing it!!! 😊
Aw, thanks Armando!! It’s quite funny how it was published just in time for the upcoming holiday. 🙂 Thanks for reading.
I love it!!! Talented writer! Thanks for sharing!
Thanks Karen!
I FORGOT HOW GOOD THIS WAS!!! So much love for this and your budding talent as a poet! 😀 😀 😀 One of my favorite lines in this whole thing is the “but God” — it just has so much power. 😉 Keep writing, lovely little sister of mine! I am proud of you!
AWWWW!!! Sarah you are the sweetest thing and are so darn feelsy! 😀 I plan to keep writing but you have to do the same my wonderful Starcatcher friend! <3
This is so beautiful! I love how poetry like this touches my heart. It also inspires me to go write some poetry of my own… 😉
Aw, I’m glad it touched you. Yes! Please go write some poetry then share it with all of us here on KP!
Simply beautiful, Christi!! I love this so much! 😀
I’m so glad you like it! Thanks for reading!
“But God – the two most beautiful words in the Bible.” You put so many thoughts into words, and in such a beautiful way. It couldn’t possibly be more perfect. Thank you for writing, Christi 🙂
Your comment is so sweet Cindy! Thank you for reading. 🙂
I LOVE THIS POEM!!! It so touching and beautiful. Amazing job with the poetry!! Keep rocking it girl!:D (I still love your adding of the siren;) Haha keep up the fantastic work!!!
😀 Haha! You know me too well Becky, how could I not add that line? 😀 Thanks for reading and commenting. You know you could turn some of your song lyrics into beautiful poems, you should try it for fun sometime 😉 I hope to see some of your work on here soon. 😛
I like this a lot, Christi. 🙂 Keep writing poetry, and thanks for sharing.
I’m so glad you like it, Kate! Thanks for your sweet comment.
My dear friend, this is simply beautiful. It touches ones heart and warms ones soul with hope! Great job 😉 and keep it up!
Dear Sarah, I’m glad my poem fulfilled its purpose. 🙂 I hope to see some more of your own work on here soon. Thank you for reading 🙂
This shows the HOPE of life in Christ so well. Great job. 🙂
I’m so glad you understood the purpose of this poem! Thank you for your comment, Emma 😀
This poem is beautiful! 🙂 Love how you wove the wonder of the love of Christ–and hope in Him alone!
Thank you for your kind comment, Moriah! I’m glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for reading.