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WarrenLuther04 posted an update 6 years, 8 months ago
@catwing @dekreel @dragon-snapper @jenwriter17 @ariella-newheart @skredder @notawriter
Hi all! Remember that Norse Mythology short story thingymabob I was talking about like last week or so? Well, I figured out how to share it and was wondering if you guys could beta-read it for me? Thanks!
Here’s the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Dfxm4TP7D9qqnHk2rLqEZgGKv4-MXrPEO53PTWPZPy0/edit?usp=sharingUnfortunately, I think that it only allows you guys to view it, soo….. yeah.
But if you could beta-read for me that would be great! Thanks!
@warrenluther04 Yay! can’t wait to read it! 😀
@jenwriter17 Thanks! 😀 If you can comment, feel free to comment, or if you can’t you can probably just do the request edit access thingy and I can figure it out. 🙂 Thanks again!
@warrenluther04 It would be easiest to be able to request edit access, but if that’s too much trouble, then I can just tell you what I think after reading it.
@jenwriter17 Either would be fine, whatever works best for you! 🙂
@warrenluther04 okay, well i went ahead and requested it 🙂
@jenwriter17 Hmm…. The request hasn’t shown up in my inbox yet…sorry. Could you retry sending the request? Sorry! 😅
@jenwriter17 @catwing @dekreel @dragon-snapper @ariella-newheart @notawriter @skredder
Well, guys, sorry. Since that document was technically owned by my school email account and it wouldn’t allow me to transfer ownership to my actual email, I had to create a new email link so edit/comment access requests would actually go into the inbox I regularly check. Sorry!
Here’s the new link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EP3WLLIwgYuJZHs50LsPt0nDBE5Qrt3YRgICbWt4658/edit?usp=sharing
*grumbles in annoyance* 😫 😩 🙂
@warrenluther04 okay, no problem. do you still want me to send the request for comment access?
@jenwriter17 Yes, as long as it’s on the new link. Thanks for reading!
@warrenluther04 okay, I went ahead and requested 🙂
@jenwriter17 Okay! Again, thanks a lot for reading! 😀
@warrenluther04 your welcome! 🙂
What a cool story! Great job, @warrenluther04 😀
I don’t have a Google Docs account, so I can’t request access, but I will draw attention to one thing that I noticed. It is a good thing that the magic in the story has limitations, but when Ualair uses too much and cannot heal his arm, it just seemed as though you dwelt too much on that fact. I would suggest going through and making the references to that more concise. 🙂
@ariella-newheart Thanks!
Oh, okay. Hmm….that does make sense. I’ll see what I can do! 😀 🙂
I just requested edit access.
@skredder Thanks! 😀 I’ll give you access! Thanks for reading! 😀 😀
Wow! Okay, so I finally commented on the story. I had read it very soon after you posted the link. I just got a wee bit busy and couldn’t go through it a little more thorough until now. It was a really fun and interesting read! Thank you for letting me read it!
@skredder Thanks! That’s fine, I’m generally really busy. But I’m on spring break now!!! 😀 😀 😀 Thanks! And thank you for beta-reading!!!! 😀 😀