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Allison posted an update 10 months, 1 week ago
How late did everyone stay up? I made it to 2:15 ish
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I made it to 12:30 XD
ALSO…I looked at your pinterest board (Hugo’s to be exact)…AND WHO GETS IN THE HOSPITAL?!?!?
Jean. She was captured and later hospitalized. And…. well…. the book took a shocking turn and now Vikii does die 🙁 And Jean. I feel so bad!! Hugos life will never be the same.
ALLISON!!!! Poor Hugo!!! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME??? TO HIM?!?!?
okay now I have to read your book. PLEASSE post some of it so I can read it XD
Heres when I introduce him…
The grinding grew closer and soon enough, Hugo Walton pulled to a stop beside us, flipped his board up, and skillfully caught it.
“You’re not driving?” Sam asked.
“License suspension.” Hugo shrugged, not looking one bit ashamed “No big deal.”
Sam nodded, “At least you’ll get it back, right?”
Hugo shrugged again, “I dunno. Probably.”
He looked down the street, with his eyes scrunched up. “Are you guys going to take the shortcut? Or are we just going to spend all day talking?”
Sam adjusted his backpack and led the way across the street.
We were still a long way from our house, but the next block over was the Keefer woods that led straight into our backyards.
And when you kind of get a glimpse of his personality in the beginning
Windy Pines was an average town in the thick of an ancient pine forest. The population was just under five thousand so the town itself was smaller and more spread out. Windy Pines High was more in the urban section, whereas our houses were in a neighborhood deeper into the woods, down a chipped apart, mossy ashplant road.
Hugo skateboarded next to Sam as we ran down to the Keefer woods.
Sam, who had taken point, brushed his light blonde hair out of his eyes, looked both ways down the street and plunged into the woods.
“Is Jean coming?” I asked Hugo, over my shoulder, Jean was his younger sister, fourteen like me.
He shook his head and smiled at me in a strange way with his hand raised towards the sky. I looked up right as he shook a pine branch heavy with water over my head.
I spluttered and wiped my face as he shoved past me and up towards Sam. It would be pointless to try to fight him. I was so much smaller and shorter.
With a sigh, and a wet head, I trudged along after them.
Oh! And this one, when you see how he can still be fun. If you want I can post more later, these are all in the beginning.
Hugo sat down next to me on the floor and we all began to talk about the week.
“You want to hear something exciting?” Sam hooted after Jean told him her command, “Ask Hugo!”
“Ok, what are you hiding?” She poked, fiddling with her clock next to her bed.
His face remained a mask of soberness, “Nothing. Nothing at all.” But his eyes were full of a joke.
She raised her eyebrows, “Shauna? Sam? You can tell me!”
I had no idea what the boys were talking about, but it had to be good.
“You know Evangiline Wendell?” Sam said in a low tone. “The one with curly brown hair and big eyes? Hugo’s giiiiiirrlllfriiend? The girl he was holding hands with?”
Jean fell off the bed as Sam laughed. “WHAT?”
Hugo jumped up, “Sam, you couldn’t keep a secret if your life depended on it. And why were you spying on me?”
He shrugged, “Let’s see… I wasn’t spying, I happened across your ‘moment’ when I was going home for the day, I always take the shortcut through the baseball field, you know that.”
Hugo shrugged, “Whatever.”
By now Jean had recovered from her shock and she was now standing on the foot of her bed, teetering precariously, “I can’t believe it! Evangeline?”
He nodded slowly looking completely unfazed, “Yep.”
She and I burst out laughing, we laughed until our sides hurt. Hugo could be way too cool sometimes.
Last one (You dont have to read them all, sorry I posted so many XD)
This one is told by the main character, Shauna. The blankets at the foot of my bed shifted and Sam pulled the diary out, “Keeping secrets?” He teased, flipping the pages open and leaning away from me.
I lunged for it, not worried about the so-called ‘secrets’ but more of the bitter truth.
“Sam! Give it back.” I hissed kicking my covers off, “You can’t–”
“Is this a heart? Ha! It’s over Hugos name!”
“Ssshhh!” I warned, yanking it out of his hands, a faint blush was creeping over my cheeks. I had written that, five years ago? When…when everything was different.
After quite some time of teasing, my clock read a ridiculous hour and Sam hurried off to bed.
With a sigh of exhaustion, I opened the journal to the page Sam was reading and reading it made me feel like I got punched in the gut. Pained and breathless.
It was the time when Hugo was there for me when I needed him the most. Sam was in a larger town for operation due to a broken arm, leaving Scott and I to stay at the Waltons by ourselves. And he saw me crying and hugged me like a brother until I calmed down.
I noticed that I had drawn a few hearts to my embarrassment, but ignoring that fact, I closed the book and turned off the light.
That entry reminded me that a person can change for the worse, but they’ll always have a bit of goodness in them, though they may not show it, it’s there.
Don’t apologize! You could post a hundred snippets and I would read them all!
I love it!! Especially the last two… <333
For some reason I thought Jean was Hugo's OLDER sister!! I don't know where I got that lol!
And PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEEE post more!!! I love your writing!!!
Really??? Wow, thank you!
@savannah_grace2009
Here one of the super sad scenes I wrote before Vikii…. Vikii dies 😭
Vikii sighed, her breath shaky, “I think I am dying.”
His face fell, I could see his world crumbling inside him. “V-vikii.. I… I…”
“Hugo stop. We’re making it too dramatic.”
“You’re making it too dramatic,” He shot back, with a laugh in the back of his throat.
They looked into each other’s eyes for a long time.
“I–” he started, but Vikii cut him off, her eyes swimming with tears. She put her one free hand on his cheek and tried to smile. “I love you too.,” She coughed again and shuddered, “your eyes sparkle when you’re happy.”
He jerked his head back, “I…I don’t care about any of that. I just want you, you Vikii. You…”
She burst into tears and Hugo hugged her tight. “Are you ok, does it hurt? I mean, I know it does, but worse?”
She shook her head, “Hugo I love you. It was my own stupid fault that I ignored you, and I was mean. I didn’t know…and…and…”
“I always thought that was kinda cute.” He said truthfully, “You don’t need to worry, honestly, I’ve always liked you just the way you are. A slightly disagreeable, mesmerizing, hilarious and daring girl. You’re also not too girly.”
She cried harder, “I don’t want to die! I want to live in this new world with all of you!”
A few more tears traveled down his pale face. He smiled through them in a loving way and bent down and pulled her into a kiss. Her eyes widened with surprise, but she kissed him back without hesitation. He supported her back with one of his arms and held the other to the side of her face.
I felt a strange cold thing tickle my cheek and realize that it was tears, feeling a bit bad about shrugging Paxton away. I grabbed his hand and held it tight, I didn’t want to even think about losing him.
He pulled her closer and kissed her harder, I could faintly hear Sam pretending to gag. I averted my eyes to the floor and let them enjoy their moment. Paxton pulled me into a side hug and I watched my tears splash on the marble floor.
And this one is in the hospital. And shows a bit about Hugos past.
“We’ve got to get in now!” Sam whispered, “Should we break the window?”
“With what?” I shot back, near tears.
He opened his mouth and shut it, looking crestfallen.
“Electronic touchscreen deadbolt…” Hugo muttered, turning the sparkling silver handle back and forth. He pressed a few buttons before turning the deadbolt knob with the key hole in it.
“Pretty common in big cities, but usually they are located in residential places, not hospitals, they aren’t that strong. Sam, hand me your knife.
Sam obeyed and Hugo rolled it around in his hands before gently slid the tip under the bottom of the left side of the lock and pried, the metal bent slightly upwards, leaving a small cavity, enough to stick a piece of wire in.
“Shauna, do you have any earrings or bobby pins? I need wire! Quickly!”
I felt my earlobes for earrings because I forgot if I was wearing them. I wasn’t.
Without a second thought, I swiftly yanked the necklace off my neck and fiddled with the wire heart, just as I suspected, it could be untwisted.
I handed it to Hugo, unsure what shape to form it into. He quickly pulled it apart and fashioned it into a pick. He carefully slid it into the hole and almost instantly I heard a click!
“It’s just a simple low security lock,” He said with a smug smile, turning the handle “don’t ask me how I know.”
Then he pushed the door open and ran inside. “HANDS UP!” He yelled, causing the four surgeons to jump.
@acancello
I mean…duh! You’re writing is AMAZING and if you don’t publish it I will be SUPER MAD and hunt you down and hold your charries hostage until you do!!!
Wait so are Shauna and Paxton dating? I never knew if that was the case or not.
And Hugo+Vikki….<333 IT'S SO SAD!
Lol!! Dont worry, I’m publishing hopefully this year!
Paxton and Shauna are sorta dating. They met in Hampton and Shauna had an instant crush on him, he didnt seem to care for her at all.
Over the course of the story, you get to see how Paxton is actually a lot more calm and gentle only around her.
Near the end, Paxton (SPOILER) reveals that he is actually working with C.H.I.M.E. the team they are super agints and he tries to kill Sam.
Shortly after something else happens, Paxton cant kill them and lies to C.H.I.M.E. to save them even if it kills him.
Once he kisses her at the hotel the day before they reach C.H.I.M.E. its official. XD
And when everything is finished, Shauna adopts a kid and Pax become his ‘Dad’.
When they grow up and get married they have a sweet little girl named Angela Violet and thats the end.
(There age gap though… its a little big. Shes 15 and hes 18. But they are the absolute sweetest couple! Though Hugo and Vikii are better)
ALLISON! how are you so good at coming up with plot twists?!?! I could never!
@savannah_grace2009
Really????😅
@acancello
YES!
😂 💗 Its not just me, everyone on here is great at it!
My plot twists always feel so…cliche!!
I dont think so! I feel like they are better than mine 🙂
Really? XD
@savannah_grace2009
Yep!