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hybridlore posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago
@kyronthearcanin Hey! I’m working on Katrin’s story again right now, at least for the moment, and I wrote a scene that doesn’t really fit that well… but I’m not sure how to fix it, because it’s kind of a bridge to something that needs to happen… anyway, if you ever have time, I would love to brainstorm with you!
Sure! I may be on and off because of randomness going on (we have a wacky schedule XD) but I would love to help brainstorm!
Awesome!! XD Yeah, I totally get that, thanks tho! So basically, I don’t know if you remember where I stopped last.. it was right as Katrin’s about to leave the rebel’s building, and (I’ve added) then she sees that they have her brother, and decides not to leave.
Here’s the part I’m not sure about, it just doesn’t really flow well… and it’s sort of out of character for her, if that makes sense lol. She goes back in the building, but gets locked out of the original room they were held in… and then is caught by the rebels who bring Arren in. But when she realizes she’s locked out, she just kind of.. stands there. In the hallway. Since there’s nowhere for her to go. And then when the rebels find her, they’re just like… “Wait, how did you get out?” lol
So yeah… it’s just not seeming very realistic, and I’m not sure if I know how to change it. Sorry that was kind of a rant, lol. Lemme know if you want me to send you the rest of it 😉
Yeah… probably go ahead and send me the rest lol. I think I can probably imagine it better that way. 😉
Ok! Yeah, sorry that sounds a little confusing. I’ll send you an email in a sec 😉 Thanks!
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