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Aye, so I finally finished a short story I started sometime last year…it’s essentially a combination of a lot of things I’m not used to, including but not limited to: description, different character voice, trying to write in a different style, a semi-retelling allegory, etc, etc, etc, etc…. I wanted to practice a lot of stuff, take a break from my usual style of work…
Anyways, if you guys could maybe look it over and tell me what you think? Absolutely no pressure, of course. How was the style? Did it seem ok? Was the character voice okay?
Anyways, the link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ujO0OKa66-BrMcSM6VDuKa5FmSUB9AA1/view?usp=sharing
And some tags…. (please don’t feel pressured to read)
@gracie-j @nova21 @issawriter7 @writerlexi1216 @daisy-torres @anyone-else
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If hours don't turn into daysOOooh, girl, this is SO exciting!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SOO MUCH for tagging me!!!!! I’ll definitely be reading this, but I probably won’t get to it tomorrow if that’s okay. <33 Can’t WAIT!!!!!!! *does not know what wait is capitalized*
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TeenWritersNook.com@issawriter7 Ahh tysm! No problem, take your time!
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@devastate-lasting OOH!! I can’t wait to read it, but ’tis a wee bit late over here, so I won’t get to it ’til tomorrow!!! I’ll let you know then, aight?
@gracie-j Cool! Thank you!
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@devastate-lasting Of course!
GIRLLL it was AMAZING!!! I loved it sooo muchhh!!!! I never once saw that plottwist coming!!! And it was SOOOO creative!!! Great job!!!! And the foreeeshadowinnngggg. AND THAT END LINE???? Brilliant XD
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
@daisy-torres AHHH thank you so much girl! I’m really glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and your comments! I really appreciate it!
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@devastate-lasting Whoa. that. was. awesome. Like, the intensity, the suspense, the…everything. SO AMAZING! And the ending? I’m with Daisy–that was FANTASTIC!
@gracie-j Ah thank you so much! I’m really glad you enjoyed it!
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@devastate-lasting You’re welcome! It was fabulous!
@devastate-lasting Of course!!! Keep up the fantastic work!!!!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
@daisy-torres @gracie-j Ah, one last question for you two! What genre would you say this is? I’m really bad at determining the genres of my work, haha…
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If hours don't turn into daysHmm, @devastate-lasting My guess is probably Supernatural Suspense/Mystery. Maaaybe fantasy, but definitely supernatural!
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
@daisy-torres Ah, that makes sense! Thanks!
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