Beta reading for chapter 1 of The Apostle’s Sister

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    Anonymous
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      Hello!

      So I just finished the third-draft version of The Apostle’s Sister chapter 1. (Yes, I’m being a productive procrastinator and focusing on making the first chapter “perfect” before I move on to second-drafting everything else. XD) It has already gone through two rounds of beta reading, and I’ve taken it as far as I can with those suggestions.

      So to make this short (because I can be longwinded, sorry!), if you’d like to beta read Chapter 1, let me know. I would appreciate it!

      Just a warning though: I made the customs of the time period very vivid, and there is some graphic content. I tried not to make it overly so, since this book is meant for teens. But I would say that it most likely wouldn’t be appropriate for anyone under 14.

      Thank you!!

      #91386
      Anonymous
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        @joy-caroline ME ME ME ME ME ME ME PICK ME ME ME ME PLEASE ME ME ME!

        Ahem. I would love to beta read Chapter Uno of TAS. No issues with content, of course. I appreciate the opportunity.

        *quietly chanting the background “Me me me me me me me…”

        #91388
        Alexa Autorski
        @writerlexi1216
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          @joy-caroline

          Ooooh, did somebody say they totally needed someone to read through their first chapter? COUNT ME IN! I’d be more than happy to take a looksie at it, if you’d like! I think this book sounds very interesting, so I’m on board 🙂

          *also chanting in the background*

          #91389
          Anonymous
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            @gracie-j

            Great, thank you! Email me at jc@joycarolineauthor.com and I will get the first chapter right to you. Much appreciated!!

            #91390
            Anonymous
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              @writerlexi1216

              Yay! Sounds awesome. Thank you so much for volunteering!

              Just email me at jc@joycarolineauthor.com and I will send the chapter to you.

              #91407
              Anonymous
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                @writerlexi1216

                I just realized you gave your email in the WIP Chat, so I’ll send the chapter there. That way you don’t have to worry about emailing me.

                Thanks for beta reading! I really appreciate it!

                #91409
                Alexa Autorski
                @writerlexi1216
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                  @joy-caroline

                  Oh, great! I tried emailing yesterday but I suppose it never went through… I don’t send very many emails, so I probably didn’t do something right lol. I’ll be happy to check out your first chapter though!

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                  Anonymous
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                    @writerlexi1216

                    That’s ok, haha. Sometimes it doesn’t work for no reason… idk. But I just sent the chapter to your inbox! Hope you enjoy it, and thanks again!

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