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Tagged: Odd Team Out, scene critiques, scenes
So I’ll give some background on the scene here. My hero (well, side character actually) was injured very badly by the bad guys and still saved by the bad guys for a reason he doesn’t know.
This is the first scene the bad guy really talks about anything regarding his plan and this is a bit of a turning point at how they treat the good guy.
Anyway, any ideas are appreciated, and there are plenty more scenes I can put up if you guys like them. 😉
Go to the other one. I have no idea why two topics came up.
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