Scene Critique

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    Rosey Mucklestone
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      So I’ll give some background on the scene here. My hero (well, side character actually) was injured very badly by the bad guys and still saved by the bad guys for a reason he doesn’t know.
      This is the first scene the bad guy really talks about anything regarding his plan and this is a bit of a turning point at how they treat the good guy.
      Anyway, any ideas are appreciated, and there are plenty more scenes I can put up if you guys like them. 😉

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      Rosey Mucklestone
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        Go to the other one. I have no idea why two topics came up.

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