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Hi KeePers,
Some of you may remember a while ago when I posted the first chapter of a short story of diary entries from a character in a novel who doesn’t have a name.
I’ve had the story complete for two months or so and I just finally gave it an edit, so now I’m ready to look for beta readers.
If any of you are interested, it’s a truly short story — only about 3,000 words. It follows the of a character in a novel who struggles with the apparent cruelty of life. I think it turned out well, but we’ll see. 🙂
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I’m in.
Writer. Dreamer. Sometimes blogger. MBTI mess. Lover of Jesus and books.
@daeus Sure, I’ll have a read-through. I think I remember reading that chapter. 😀
Currently reading Les Miserables
@perfectfifths Thanks. Just sent you an invitation to a google doc.
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@daeus That was half an hour ago, and I still haven’t gotten on. :\ Would it be via email?
Currently reading Les Miserables
@perfectfifths Yes, I sent it via email. If you haven’t got the invitation, here’s a link to it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12ZY5PcSrhX1LdSb69sP_tD4MnPqYZxuCyz6Zwr4i7W8/edit?usp=sharing
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@daeus Okay, so I just clicked on the link…and couldn’t stop reading. This is magnificent! I only made one comment at the end, but that’s just a suggestion. 🙂 Great work!
A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
@daeus Thanks. I don’t know why I didn’t receive it. 🙂
What kind of feedback are you looking for?
Currently reading Les Miserables
@perfectfifths Well, anything, but I think particularly descriptions/sentence structure. I want to make sure it flows just right and is easy to envision.
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@daeus Right-o. I’ll look at it tomorrow. 🙂
Currently reading Les Miserables
@kate-flournoy Just tagging you because you’re normally into this. If you want to do it, I’ll get you your own doc.
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@Daeus yes!
If you had not tagged me and I’d missed the opportunity you’d have been in serious trouble.
@kate-flournoy I hate being in serious trouble.
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