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H’lo, Kapeefers… if anyone here writes songs/ likes writing music, feel free to post lyrics and ideas and anything you like here đ
Not sure if anyone but @dekreel and I do that, but if you do… this is kind of like the Writer’s Corner for songwriters:
All my songs are a little unpolished, still. Most of them are worship songs, but a few are just jams. The melodies are always the hardest part for me, and I also tend to disregard meter when I don’t feel like making all my syllables line up XD
This is one of them:
Knelt by an altar
Each prayer makes me shake
The flame of your love, God
Is all that keeps me awake
I looked to a lion
But my eyes saw a lamb
There are no foundations
On which I can stand
Then through the darkness
Holy light, and a hand
Grace like an ocean tide
My feet on new land
Keep me alive
I’m living off of smoke and singing choked vocals
If there ever was an ocean wave
That did not matter anyway
That was me, that was me
That was me
On the edge of cold water
I run from your knife
But every cut that it gives me
Strengthens my life
I keep changing out pictures
I hold in my frame
Only one shines through shadows
The one bearing your name
Keep me alive
I’m living off of smoke and singing choked vocals
If there ever was an ocean wave
That did not matter til today
That was me, that was me
That was me
God, you pull me out of drownings
You set me on the mountains
You are fire mixed with water
You are all that I have longed for
Keep me alive
Show me your light
Show me your life
Keep me alive
*Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.@sam-kowal *applauds* Bravo! Nice song!
This is a little worship song I did a while back:
V1
Bright paths, carousels
People everywhere
Excitement is in the air
Adventure, fun and games
Welcome faces on
I think I took a wrong turn
I’m off the path
V2
Palm trees, paradise
Sun is shining bright
After a peaceful night
Seaside, breezy sky
Far from the city fray
But I can’t stay
I’ve been chasing lights
Chorus
Travel and fun
Under the Sun
Shining so bright
Until the night falls
But this isn’t home
If I go on,
I’ll be alone
I’m just chasing lights
Chasing lights
(V2)
…But I can’t stay
Even though it’s…
(Chorus)
Bridge
It’s like a tower
Standing tall
I’m pretty sure
It will never fall
But then it gives
The slightest crack
And all fall down
And I can’t go back
And then I realize
That all that light
It’s really darkness
That’s in disguise
And now there is
Just one Light to follow
One Light
One Light
Travel and fun
Under the Sun
Shining so bright
Until the night falls
But this isn’t home
If I go on,
I’ll be alone
I’m chasing darkness
I’m chasing darkness
Sharp stones, broken bones
Rugged, crooked trail
But this is the path
To paradise
You can pronounce it however you want.
And the bridge of the Kapeefer song I’ve been writing!
Wolves with cat tails, cats with wings,
Sarcastic elves and raspberry kings
Is that not enough for you?
Then what about Aethasians, chair-melting dragons
Red-marker storms, Gramatacallions
It’s not finished yet…
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@dekreel đ That’s EPIC
The Keeper Song ;D đ
I like the first one, too
Great Job!
*Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.@sam-kowal Thanks! đ
@shannon, you’re big on music, right? Do you write music at all?
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@dekreel Um ya…I am really big into music. It’s like half of my life. The other half is reading and writing.
I love your’s and @sam-kowal’s by the way. They are both awesome! Do either of y’all write the melody for them? Do either of y’all have a youtube channel?
I write song lyrics. But I have trouble with the melody. My guitar teacher might be able to write some music for one of my songs soon. Which is pretty cool. Here are the lyrics.
There once was a young girl; winsome and bold
Along came a young man; he had all the goldÂ
He offered her diamonds in exchange for her hand
She quickly refused, although it seemed grand.
There still was a young girl; sparkling and bright
Along came a farm boy; a poor man alright.
He said, âI am poor, dear, and all that I hold
To offer are dewdrops, I havenât the gold.â
She softly laughed and happily said,
âIâll take your dewdrops,â while nodding her head.
âI know why theyâre better, and why theyâre loved more,
The rich seem to have far less joy than the poor.Â
ââCause dewdrops arenât diamonds and Iâm awful glad,
âCause dewdrops wonât break your heart but diamonds sure can,
Diamonds are perfect or so thought to be,
But when you have dewdrops you surely are free.â
She never told anyone why she refused the rich man
But was pleased to join the poor manâs clan
For she knew something âbout dewdrops that few cared to know
And she remembered what she said long agoâ
When she softly laughed and happily said,
âIâll take your dewdrops,â while nodding her head.
âI know why theyâre better, and why theyâre loved more,
The rich seem to have far less joy than the poor.Â
ââCause dewdrops arenât diamonds and Iâm awful glad,
âCause dewdrops wonât break your heart but diamonds sure can,
Diamonds are perfect or so thought to be,
But when you have dewdrops you surely are free.â
But when you have dewdrops you surely are free.
It’s not nearly as epic as your’s or Sam’s, but the tune that he is putting to it is incredible and I’m extremely, extremely excited about it.
@shannon Sounds like folk! It’s beautiful!
I don’t have a YouTube channel or anything. I like singing, but I don’t like my voice. So unless I am very motivated, I won’t sing X) Of course, I WILL HAVE to sing so people know what my music sounds like… *sighhhh…*
I do write the melody! Entirely in my head, as the only working instrument in the house right now is an extremely-off-key zither and a guitar (which I still only barely know how to play)
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@dekreel, Thanks! đ Ooh, what type of guitar is it?
@shannon What type? Ummm… acoustic? It’s acoustic, but it has a built in tuner and a place to plug in a speaker. If that’s what you mean
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@dekreel Sorry, I meant “who made it”? Ah, you have an electric acoustic, just like me. I have a Fender acoustic electric. This is it–
@shannon Ahh. Mine is made by “Fishman”
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@dekreel I see. I’ve heard that those are pretty good guitars đ
@shannon I know absolutely nothing about guitar brands XD
Do you sing, by the way?
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@shannon I like singing harmony the best. I can do fifth harmony better than third, actually (if you know what that means).
I ALWAYS get songs stuck in my head! And it’s usually REALLLLLY agitating ones like the Bob the Builder theme song XD XD or the Daytona theme song or something (“DAYTONNNNNAAAAAAAAAAAAA”) *bangs head on table*
Right now I’m actually listening to music, so I don’t have anything stuck in my head. But there will be!
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