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I have another book series that I’m going to write in the future, but I am having difficulties with the title. Pick the one you like:
1. The Heathen’s Sword
2. The Heathen Sword (without ‘s)
3. The Heirs of DotrianThanks!
Jackson E. Graham
http://jacksonegraham.wixsite.com/jackson-e-graham@warrioroftherealm One or three. I probably like three better, but I think it largely depends on what cover design you go with.
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My first title was #1, but then I tried saying it and it didn’t roll of the tongue.
Jackson E. Graham
http://jacksonegraham.wixsite.com/jackson-e-graham@warrioroftherealm I think it sounds fine, though it is a tiny bit rough. Fyi, I think the first two sound like high-action novels with warrior monks and lots of gut punching. The third one sounds more like a high fantasy to me. Something a little quieter, but that has really good world building. Like I said before though, the cover will affect that impression a lot.
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Warrior monks and gut punching. 🙂 Sounds like something my younger brother would write.
I definitely am aiming for a more gritty sound (to match the mood of the books).Jackson E. Graham
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I’d go with 2. It seems more gritty and I had a bit of a problem saying number one as well. 🙂
@warrioroftherealm Two or three. The second title does sound darker than the third. It depends what angle you are going for.
INTJ - Inhumane. No-feelings. Terrible. Judgment and doom on everyone.
@WarrioroftheRealm I like three. 😉
@WarrioroftheRealm Three. 🙂
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