By Sarah I. Jones
As I open the book
My story begins.
A boy in a hole
And then it ends.
I sigh as I read
This horrible start.
I think and I think
But I know in my heart
There’s more to this tale
Than could ever be told.
But how to begin?
Before I get old.
I pick at my story
And tear out the start.
Poking and prodding,
I cut out the heart.
My story’s now lifeless,
But, hey, it is done.
No, I can’t leave it hanging
When it’s only begun.
There’s a tear in my pages
And a rip at the seam.
Oh, blast it all, story!
I’m going to scream!
But wait, I can fix this,
For all that it needs
Is a dab of ideas,
And a bit of a dream.
I can fix up that ending
And fill in that space.
A hole in the plotline
Would be a disgrace!
I’ll add in some fantasy
And throw in some art.
All it needs now
Is my pencil’s lead heart.
A drop of the pen,
A touch of a key,
That hole in the plot
Means nothing to me!
Insert this storyline,
Throw out that plot,
This hole in the page
Will be naught but a spot.
An image of grandeur
Is shimmering through;
I imagine the sights
And think of the view!
The light of ideas
And the twinkle of dreams
Shines out through the letters
And glows from the seams.
Enough with the writing,
The hole is now mended.
And, as all stories must,
My tale’s now ended.
Fifteen-going-on-sixteen-year-old Sarah Jones lives mainly in the real world of SoCal, and her imagination is always wildly active. Living life for her Creator is one of her greatest pleasures. Between her awesome-crazy brothers, 24/7 homeschooling, and just having fun with her friends, she never has any time to be bored with life. Even so, she still dreams of fantastic adventures and will quickly eat up a good fantasy book or adventure series. However, when she can’t find a book to fascinate herself with, Sarah will take to the pen and paper (or the computer) and create her own world to disappear into.
Wow! I really liked this! Great job! 😀
I love this poem! Your rhymes and rhythm are very consistent and unexpected, making your poem easy and fun to read. Keep up the great work! 🙂
I love this–especially the almost playful way that you wrote it. Awesome job, Sarah!
Brilliant poem, Sarah! I love it. 🙂
The style of this poem reminds me of Dr. Suess…which means it’s brilliant.
This was really very entertaining. The rhyming was beautifully done. It was so sweet and creative. A real joy to read. Keep up the great work, Sarah.
What they said. 😉 This does remind me a great deal of Dr. Suess, which is a very high compliment. 😉
This is awesome, Sarah! So creative and concise with thoughts that it would probably take me a few pages to convey. Great work! Keep writing for the Lord in such an excellent way.