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May 25, 2024 at 10:08 am #179993
(Reposting, because the original was long to the infinite abyss of moderation.)
This is a novella that I wrote over the last eight weeks for my creative writing class. I am quite pleased with how it came out. If anyone would like to give me feedback, or just read it for fun, here is the link (in reply.) Feel free to give me a chapter-by-chapter critique or wait until you finish.
This is copy-pasted from a word doc. The word doc has nice and clean formatting, but this one might be a bit messy still. I couldn’t figure out how to share the word doc, or a PDF, so this will have to do.
Tags: (Let’s see, who to tag…) @highscribeofaetherium (I know you’ve read most of this already) @rae @savannah_grace2009 @thearcaneaxiom @ummmmm…Ican’tthinkofanyoneelsebutwhatever @anyone!
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π Appreciator of BooksMay 25, 2024 at 10:11 am #179998Are you kidding me, Wyoh, that’s the THIRD time you’ve eaten that link!
Um, let’s see. I’ll try posting it under my status update.
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π Appreciator of BooksMay 25, 2024 at 10:12 am #179999Oh, wait, I forgot about this tactic:
Google doc: h ttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1w_TDIfhF5atyi6gn4zhh3rudnxWtULjnj06LWehEO0g/edit?usp=sharing (delete the space after the ‘h.’)
Take that, Wyoh!
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π Appreciator of BooksMay 25, 2024 at 12:59 pm #180005May 25, 2024 at 11:22 pm #180049WOW. I am only like 2 paragraphs in but I got goosebumps….
I feel like I’ve never read your writing before except for RP’s, and OH MY GOODNESS it’s amazing!
Just wow.
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333May 26, 2024 at 8:06 am #180055Thank you! Yeah, I donβt think I have sharedΒ anyΒ actual writing. A lot of world building stuff, but no actual writing. (Oh, yeah, except that short story a while ago. Not sure if you read that one.)
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π Appreciator of BooksMay 26, 2024 at 8:43 am #180056I don’t remember if I read that one or not….lol
I finished the first chapter!
Lukas&Livia
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Sef&Chase
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333May 26, 2024 at 3:24 pm #180073Oooh, I just finished it! I felt like I was reading a published novel, it was that good!
Lukas&Livia
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Sef&Chase
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LEFSE FOREVER!!!!!! <333May 26, 2024 at 5:10 pm #180083Thanks! That means a lot!
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π Appreciator of BooksMay 28, 2024 at 2:45 pm #180127:Jonas
I’m jealous.
That was a great story, I will definitely read it again.
I totally concur with Sara
"You need French Toast."
May 28, 2024 at 4:09 pm #180132That was really, really, really good story!! Your writing is amazing!!
"No! Monkeys should have pets, all monkeys should have pets!"
May 28, 2024 at 4:53 pm #180134I just finished reading it, too, and wow. That was really good! Your fight scenes were awesome! Amazing job!!
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May 28, 2024 at 5:03 pm #180136Thank you!
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