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    Anonymous
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      So, you’ve heard my characters a lot I’m sure but you have no idea what the series is. Well, I’m finally revealing my story little by little. Also, keep your eyes open for my critique requests. I’ll be sharing bits here but only when I want to share without getting critiques. I’m doing my 1st rewrite so I’ll be needing advice on how to go about that too. Sorry if it seems like I’m copying you @godlyfantasy12 but you had a great idea and I’m giving you full credit for it. 😉 Lol

      @freedomwriter76 @felicity @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @gwyndalf-the-wise @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h

      Please tag whoever you think might like this. I’ll be posting more later today.

      #139942
      GodlyFantasy12
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        @sarafini ur good gurl! If others wanna do this that’s fine too!

        #IfMarcelDiesIRiot
        #ProtectMarcel
        #ProtectSeb

        #139951
        Anonymous
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          It would be great if y’all subscribed like on godly’s post. That way I don’t have to tag anyone. Cookies and popcorn are provided on the table. Waves her magic author wand so a table crammed with snacks appears. They are allergy free btw. comfortable seating is also provided. Cozy chairs and couches with pillows appears. Might as well make this fun right? Lol

          #139954
          Esther
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            @sarafini

            Oooh! Awesome!! 😄

            *plops into cozy chair with a cookie in one hand and popcorn in the other*

            Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

            #139967
            Anonymous
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              *plops into cozy chair with a cookie in one hand and popcorn in the other*

              Welcome @esther-c

              I forgot to subscribe to this myself. Lol I’ll be sharing sneak peeks pretty soon but I’m going to wait until a few more people show up. 😉


              @lightoverdarkness6

              Forgot to invite you. If you scroll up a little you can see what this thread is all about although I think the title speaks for itself. 😉

              #140028
              Keilah H.
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                @sarafini Ooh! Cool! Can’t wait to see it.

                Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                #140044
                whaley
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                  The title is very intriguing…

                  *Stuffs a donut into mouth and settles next to Esther*

                  “Everything is a mountain”

                  #140056
                  Felicity
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                    @sarafini

                    Thanks for the snacks! They’re really good! 😉 Can’t wait to hear more about your WIP!

                    He must increase, but I must decrease.

                    #140206
                    Gwyndalf the Wise
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                      @sarafini

                      OOo yay! *enjoys snacks* *and spy stories* *is very excited*

                      "...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
                      (Part of) Isaiah 45:19

                      #140269
                      Anonymous
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                        Wow! I counted 5 or 6 of you! Yay! This is so exciting. Ok I guess I should start with the cast of characters. Today I’ll post the MC’s then tomorrow or Wednesday I’ll post the antagonists. The side characters aren’t super prominent in book 1 but I have a few surprises with them in book 3. Book 2 will probably be the least character heavy (I think that’s the phrase I’m looking for)

                         

                        Kyle Smith (last name is in the works): a 15 year old (his age was changed to 15 because many people told me they thought he was in his mid-teens when I mentioned his age), a quiet boy, autistic, 5 foot exactly but he’s starting his growing. By book 2 it’ll be mentioned that he grew 6 inches in about 4-6 months, he has brown short hair, small round glasses, wears casual sweats or jeans and T-shirts, he’s very much an INFJ personality and only socializes with people he knows well. Book 1 revolves around him and his POV.

                        I’m going to stop there and post the other 2 MC’s later.

                        #140270
                        Anonymous
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                          Side characters will be talked about after the antagonists. I have 6 that will come into play throughout my story and really throw tension in throughout the trilogy. Oh yeah, I forgot to mention this is a trilogy. I’ll be talking plot and setting next week or at least after the characters are done.

                          #140335
                          Felicity
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                            @sarafini

                            Wow! I counted 5 or 6 of you! Yay! This is so exciting. Ok I guess I should start with the cast of characters. Today I’ll post the MC’s then tomorrow or Wednesday I’ll post the antagonists. The side characters aren’t super prominent in book 1 but I have a few surprises with them in book 3. Book 2 will probably be the least character heavy (I think that’s the phrase I’m looking for)

                            Sounds good!

                            Kyle Smith (last name is in the works): a 15 year old (his age was changed to 15 because many people told me they thought he was in his mid-teens when I mentioned his age), a quiet boy, autistic, 5 foot exactly but he’s starting his growing. By book 2 it’ll be mentioned that he grew 6 inches in about 4-6 months, he has brown short hair, small round glasses, wears casual sweats or jeans and T-shirts, he’s very much an INFJ personality and only socializes with people he knows well. Book 1 revolves around him and his POV.

                            I can very much relate with the INF personalities. 😉 Can’t wait to meet the other MCs!

                            Side characters will be talked about after the antagonists. I have 6 that will come into play throughout my story and really throw tension in throughout the trilogy. Oh yeah, I forgot to mention this is a trilogy. I’ll be talking plot and setting next week or at least after the characters are done.

                            Wonderful!

                            He must increase, but I must decrease.

                            #140339
                            Keilah H.
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                              @sarafini Awesome MC! And hey, I’m autistic too, and I wear glasses, so I always love characters like me.

                              Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                              #140931
                              Anonymous
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                                Whoops! Guess I didn’t post the other 2 MCs. Sorry. My week has been hectic!

                                Jessica (she’s gone through 3 name changes [poor girl XD] Cynthia, Susan and now Jessica or Jessi or Jess depending on who’s calling her lol) She’s very much a bookworm and loves journaling/drawing. Her dad’s an FBI agent and her mom basically hates her (hopefully some of you were able to read my Jessica’s Last Christmas short story. I’ll post that if you haven’t. It’ll give you a great glimpse into her family life, her friends and her personality. book 2 and the prequel short story will revolve around her mainly. She’s 13 and prone to wear jeans and blouses. All my characters go to school btw. Idk why I don’t have homeschoolers in my stories but that’ll change hopefully. Lol There will also be conflict between her and Kyle throughout the series and especially in book 3/the sequel series

                                Alec: Picture a mini Kyle. Only more extroverted and more leader-driven, 16 and book 3 will mainly revolve around him. There will be a little bit of tension between him and Kyle.

                                You can probably understand why the tension since Jessica is a cute teenager plus Kyle and Alec are both older than her which makes for the perfect romantic tension in the series (more on that later).

                                #140932
                                Anonymous
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                                  He’s 16 years old I mean. I just realized that it might not have made sense.

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