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    Loopy
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      Hello! It is pretty much halfway through the school year, and I have finally decided what I want I want to do for my senior project this year. (As you can see, I am a Procrastination Queen.)

      I am going to do a full color, 20-30 page comic book about my alien characters, Eddie and Ellie (not sure about Dante though, sorry). After I finish, I will self-publish it, which I have no idea how to do, but I’ll get there when I get there. Anyway, I want the plot to be a mini, lighthearted adventure that is not too long or complicated.

      This is what I have so far for the story (most of this is just backstory) :

      Eddie and Ellie are two twin girls of a small alien race. They move out from their family’s home together at a pretty early age to find their own way in the universe, which is typical for the people of their planet. Not sure what exactly they want to do, they begin picking up freelance jobs that mostly include capturing and turning in minor criminals for bounty rewards. They live out of their somewhat small spaceship, traveling from planet to planet. The comic will just be one short adventure they have on one of the planets.

      So I was wondering if anyone had any ideas for what should happen in the comic? And also, would you read the pages if I posted some of them as I finish them?

      “Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle

      #129164
      Power
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        @loopylin

        • Cyber Currency (¢°¢) counterfeiters
        • An alien with massive bushy pink eyebrows
        • A secret passage inside a galactic pepperoni factory
        • Glasses the locate Painite stones used in creating ¢°¢
        • A very energetic (but gullible) young forcefield suit salesalien
        • An explosion
        • A ¢°¢ counterfeit android (named Clicko’tine 587, CT5 for short) gone rogue, and spilles the bean, but is now at risk for termination.
        • An evil pet chicken

        You will love what you spend time with.

        #129165
        Power
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          I can come up with more if you want 😜

          You will love what you spend time with.

          #129166
          Loopy
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            @power

            These are fantastic, thank you. XD  There will definitely be explosions, and I will use those other ideas too (especially the bushy eyebrow alien).

            “Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle

            #129167
            Power
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              • Copper eating worms
              • A trick holograph chair 🤣
              • A spacecar that goes 20,000 miles per hour (with g-force shock absorbers of course)
              • Purple sun
              • A maintenance bot with a claustrophobic programming bug.
              • Disposable melting moving boxes
              • “Welcome to the spacetaxi! Please keep arms and legs in at all time. While on your ride please consider that for 5¢°¢ more you can get your very own nose massage or microtranslater implant! And always, thank you for riding with GalaxZ!”
              • VorTechs
              • Holobite (A holographic guard dog)
              • biobarbwire (living)
              • Electromagneticly Cloaked (Something wrapped in an electromagnetic field. This would basically fry any electric circuitry that passes through the field.)
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              You will love what you spend time with.

              #129169
              Gwyndalf the Wise
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                @loopylin
                OOOOOO YES PLEASE, I’d love to see it!!! =D
                *is very embarrassed* I went this whole time thinking Eddie was a guy… Whoops.
                Do you want any more ideas, or does Power got you covered?

                "...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
                (Part of) Isaiah 45:19

                #129172
                Loopy
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                  @gwyndalf-the-wise

                  Oh, yes! More ideas always please!

                  “Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle

                  #129173
                  Loopy
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                    @gwyndalf-the-wise

                    I went this whole time thinking Eddie was a guy… Whoops.

                    lol, nah, you’re fine. I have a bad habit of naming characters names that are technically for both genders, but are usually used for one or the other. For example, I have a boy character named Lois. He gets teased for it a lot by his friend.

                    “Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle

                    #129186
                    TheLoonyOne
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                      @loopylin

                      Ok, this sounds awesome! So excited to see it.

                      For ideas… I dunno. Maybe their first job/ how they became bounty hunters? I don’t have any specific ideas, though. I’ll think…

                      But this sounds really cool, I’m excited to see it! 😁 ah!


                      @power

                      I love your ideas 😂

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                      PrincesaChronicle22
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                        @loopylin

                        That sounds amazing!!!! You should totally do this! What do you need help with?

                        Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
                        And guess what? His is eternal (:

                        #129212
                        Loopy
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                          @princesachronicle22

                          I have a setting, backstory, and characters. I just need to figure out a plot for the comic. It’s fine if you don’t have any ideas, though.

                          “Nothing says autumn like slurpin’ apples.” -my uncle

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                          Keilah H.
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                            @loopylin I would so read it!!


                            @power
                            I like those ideas!

                            Where'd I get ya this time? The liver? The kidney? I'm runnin' outta places to put holes in ya.

                            #129226
                            PrincesaChronicle22
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                              @loopylin

                              Okay! Well then I can definatly help if you need!

                              Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
                              And guess what? His is eternal (:

                              #129228
                              Gwyndalf the Wise
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                                @loopylin
                                Ah, I’ve only met guys that have that name. went to lunch today and the guy who took our order was named Eddie XD I used have that problem with GodlyFantasy’s November, I’d only met girls with the name November. I’ll get used to Eddie eventually XD

                                I think Power’s idea about holographic chair would be hilarious. I could totally imagine Dante trying to sell it to them and then they try it out XD and the bushy-eyebrow alien could be his boss

                                • Someone steals their keys to their spaceship and during a game of laser-tag they have to get them back
                                • They think they’re going to catch a criminal they’ve been trailing for awhile, but it turns out to do that they have to finish a dance off first
                                • Aaand now I’m out of ideas for short things XD

                                "...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
                                (Part of) Isaiah 45:19

                                #129236
                                Gwyndalf the Wise
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                                  @loopylin
                                  Do you care if I ask you about your comic making process? I’m trying to see how other people do that to get ideas on possible ways of doing for myself.

                                  "...I did not say to the seed of Jacob, 'Seek Me in vain..."
                                  (Part of) Isaiah 45:19

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