A kitten

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  • January 11, 2023 at 3:35 pm #128815
    Charityanne
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      I stretch and yawn and run about I’m small and cute to see, I love to leave my small footprints wherever you have cleaned.

      I sit and cuddle in your lap when I think it’s convenient, I know that I must be the best ‘cause to me you’re very lenient.

      And when you are angry with me, I’m bashful on the spot, no one could ever keep a grudge against such a little tot.

      January 11, 2023 at 3:41 pm #128818
      Folith-Feolin
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        @charityanne

        yay poetry

        January 11, 2023 at 3:42 pm #128819
        Koshka
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          @charityanne

          Haha! This is definitely a cat. (I just read this with my cat walking over my lap to sit on the desk and stare at me.)

          Where do your poem lines end in each stanza?

          First Grand Historian of Arreth and the Lesser Realms (aka Kitty)
          Fork the Gork

          January 11, 2023 at 5:16 pm #128835
          Esther
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            @charityanne

            Cute!

            Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende

            January 11, 2023 at 6:22 pm #128846
            Charityanne
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              @koshka

              Yes the poem is called A Kitten.😊

              If you’re referring to where to pause in each paragraph that would be where the commas are.

              hope that’s what you were looking for.

              January 11, 2023 at 8:06 pm #128852
              TheLoonyOne
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                @charityanna

                That was so cute! And definitely a cat, you got it spot on 😂😁

                January 11, 2023 at 10:56 pm #128889
                Charityanne
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                  @theloonyone

                  thanks!

                  Yes the poem is called The Kitten😄

                   

                  January 12, 2023 at 5:06 pm #128959
                  Elanor
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                    @charityanne

                    So sweet! Nailed it.

                    "All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us." - Gandalf

                    January 12, 2023 at 5:31 pm #128962
                    Charityanne
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                      @elanor

                      Thank you!

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