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  • January 10, 2023 at 1:06 pm #128709
    Charityanne
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      Daydream, a thought passing by, with your head in the sky, you don’t really know why, but you must say, goodbye…

      Daydream, something that you play, every day after day, in a leisurely way, to make time go away…

      Daydream, a future or plan for what lays at hand, it’s hard but you can be what you think you can… daydream.

      January 10, 2023 at 9:42 pm #128748
      Loopy
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        I love it! Your poems are so sweet and fun to read

        Any paint can be finger paint if you don't care enough

        January 11, 2023 at 11:02 am #128779
        Charityanne
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          @loopylin

          Thanks!

          I wrote that one in the pantry yesterday ?

          January 11, 2023 at 12:46 pm #128791
          Elanor
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            Love this!

            "There’s some good in this world... and it's worth fighting for!" - Samwise Gamgee

            January 11, 2023 at 12:57 pm #128793
            Charityanne
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              @elanor

              Thanks!

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