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January 3, 2023 at 4:50 pm #127559
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Hey, y’all!!
So, I came up with this novel idea! I have no idea when I will write it. (If ever) But I already love the characters and story!!
Blurb:
Miles Harrison hasn’t seen his daughter Audrey in 16 years. 16 years ago, he and his wife, Leanne had a beautiful baby girl. There was only one problem: the couple was a part of a secret goverment agency. To keep their daughter safe, they put her in an orphanage, leaving her with a note intended for her eyes only. During a dangerous mission, Leanne was killed. Miles was crushed. Despite that, he trusted God and pushed forward, still working for the agency, his daughter and wife always on his mind. A few years went by and Miles was required to join the witness protection program. Finally, after 13 years of being in the program, Miles is allowed to leave. So he decides to search for his daughter. He finds her with a nice family and she seems content. He decides not to give away his identity to her just yet. What if she doesn’t want him? But after Audrey goes missing, Miles is forced to go looking for her. The clues lead him to an earth shattering discovery. Audrey is in more danger than Miles ever realized. Determined now more than ever, Miles continues to look for his daughter. But everything seems to be leading him farther and farther away from her. How can he trust God when he can’t see His hand at work? Will he ever be able to see his daughter again? Why would God let this happen?
Soo… what do you think? I’ll post the Audrey and Miles’s moodboards in the next posts.
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 3, 2023 at 4:54 pm #127561Audrey Leanne Harrison
Age: 16
Audrey was an orphan for 10 years since her birth. When she is finally adopted, she is overjoyed. But she still dearly misses her parents, despite never meeting them. She grows up in a Christian home and learns about the God who can do anything. Audrey places her trust in Him through the darkest times. Unbeknownst to her, her hardest challenge is about to come. Shortly after meeting a mysterious man, she is kidnapped. Can her faith still carry her through this storm?
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 3, 2023 at 4:54 pm #127562Anonymous- Rank: Wise Jester
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@esther-c I think you tagged @orielle21 wrong, which happens to the best of us!!
This idea sounds really interesting! I like it. Will you be posting any of it on KP (besides the moodboards?)
January 3, 2023 at 4:56 pm #127563Miles Alexander Harrison
Age: 45
All Miles wants is to be with his daughter, to regain time lost. But after seeing her with her new family, he isn’t so sure. Does she still want him? When Audrey goes missing, Miles love for her forces him to go looking for her. The clues lead him to an earth shattering discovery. Audrey is in more danger than Miles ever realized. Determined now more than ever, Miles continues to look for his daughter. But everything seems to be leading him farther and farther away from her. How can he trust God when he can’t see His hand at work? Will he ever be able to see his daughter again? Why would God let this happen?
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 3, 2023 at 4:57 pm #127564It’s still not super fleshed out, but I love it nonetheless!!
I will either have Miles be the POV character or both Miles and Audrey.
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 3, 2023 at 4:58 pm #127565@booksandbeakers
Oops! You’re right! 😅 Thanks for telling me!
If I ever start writing it, I totally will!!
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 3, 2023 at 5:05 pm #127568January 3, 2023 at 5:25 pm #127577Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Girl, you just gave me inspiration for another novel idea! I don’t need those rn. Lol. That’s so awesome! I’ll totally read it. Ah, kidnapping stories. I’m guessing this is a case of kidnapping anyway. Lol. I love those stories. They’re so thrilling and enlightening on what could happen if you’re not careful. *clears throat* All that to say, great idea!
January 3, 2023 at 6:40 pm #127611Wow! You should totally write that!!! Thanks for sharing, it sounds like it would be a very interesting and meaningful read!
Love is patient. Love is kind. Love never fails. -1 Corinthians
And guess what? His is eternal (:January 3, 2023 at 6:44 pm #127613Oh, that’s an amazing idea!! I love it so much!!! Whenever you start writing it, and if you post any chapters, be sure to tag me!! 😀
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January 3, 2023 at 7:38 pm #127637Such a good story idea! I love it!
The moodboards are making me cry. So sweet!
Dark is the Shadow, and yet my heart rejoices.
January 3, 2023 at 8:30 pm #127660This idea seems really cool. I very much like the character arc you seem to have for Miles. I think that it would be cool to have it be mostly Miles with a few chapters from Audrey’s POV.
Through darkness,
light shines brightestJanuary 4, 2023 at 8:28 am #127721Anonymous- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Just read the descriptions/mood boards.
It is a case of kidnapping! 😱 I’ll definitely read it!January 4, 2023 at 10:39 am #127731@sarafini @princesachronicle22 @lightoverdarkness6 @otherworldlyhistorian @orielle21 @starofthenorth
I’m so glad you all are interested in this!!! 😀
I think that it would be cool to have it be mostly Miles with a few chapters from Audrey’s POV.
Oooh! I like that idea!
Write what should not be forgotten. — Isabel Allende
January 4, 2023 at 10:44 am #127733 -
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