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August 11, 2022 at 5:45 pm #115089
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Well…here we are again. XD Another Marvel short story.
So…I wanted to try my hand at a bit of Steve X Nat. I’m sorta falling in love with this ship. š What has EVERYONE DONE TO ME!? (and darn, I can’t be angry. They make such a cute couple. XD) This one made me cry. 0_0 Anywho, let me know if any of y’all want more Steve X Nat or not. I’d be fine with writing them together more. š And if y’all have any ideas or suggestions for other Marvel short stories, just let me know! š Here we go!

This piece of beautiful artwork from the web inspired this story. šĀ
The woods fell silent. Just like that.
Over.
After all the fighting. All the struggle. All the trying…it was over.
That fast.
That instantly.
Natasha put up her weapons. She obviously wouldnāt need them any longer.
Even the insects and animals had become silent.
Thanos was gone. The battle was over.
Butā¦they hadnāt won.
Natasha walked further into the woods, into a clearing.
So manyā¦half the worldā¦gone with a snap of fingers.
Natasha looked around.
And there he was.
On his knees in the dirt beside a gun and his vibranium shields, the gray dust in his hands staining his cut and bleeding hands, was Steve.
āOh Godā¦oh Godā¦ā he whispered, over and over again.
Quiet, soft, like a desperate prayer.
Natasha took another step.
A twig snapped.
Steve looked up at her, his dirty face cleaned slightly by tears stains. āNat?ā
āSteveā¦what happened?ā
āI tried to stop him, Natasha. I tried to stop him from snapping his fingers. I tried to save everyoneā¦but it wasnāt enough.ā
āWhat did you have to stop him with? Iām sure your shields didnāt last long.ā
āMy bare hands. But Nat, what I didā¦none of it did anything. He still got to Vision. He still took the mind stone. He still snapped his fingers. He still made half the universe disappearā¦ā
āSteveā¦ā
Steveās fingers ran over the gun. Natasha glanced at it, but quickly back at Steve.
āHe still took Bucky.ā
āOh Steveā¦ā she breathed, falling to her knees in front of him.
Steveās best friend, and Bucky had been better. After Steve had already lostā¦everything and everyone he loved, Thanos had taken Bucky.
She took his hand that sat on his lap. Squeezed it.
āHeās gone, Nat, and Iā¦I didnāt even get to say goodbye.ā Steve whispered, letting go of her hand and holding onto her shoulders.
Natasha grabbed his arms, only wanting to make sure he understood that she was there. āSteveā¦Iām so sorry.ā
āI didnāt save himā¦I didnāt get to tell him one last time that I would always be thereā¦I didnātā¦Natā¦I didnāt say goodbye.ā
āI know, Steveā¦I knowā¦ā she whispered, feeling her own set of tears begin to fall.
āI couldnāt save himā¦I couldnāt save everyone. Theyāre gone, Nat.ā
āI know. Oh Steve, trust me, I know.ā
āWe lost them allā¦the world lost them all, Nat.ā
Natasha squeezed his arms tighter. āI know Steve.ā
āI thought Bucky was safeā¦I thought he was finally okay and safe and free. Iāve had Bucky with me, beside me, as my friend almost my whole lifeā¦and he didnāt die from the train like I thought he hadā¦I guessā¦ā
Steve gave her a small smile. ā…It was just time for me to lose someone elseā¦ā
Just time for me to lose someone else.
Natasha, with her right hand, let go. She stroked his bearded cheek. āYouāve lost a lot Steveā¦I knowā¦ā
Steve closed his eyes.
āBut no matter how many more people you lose Steveā¦ā
He opened his eyes and looked up at her, his blue eyes brighter with tears.
āIāll always be here.ā
Steve merely stared at her, tears still coursing down his cheeks.
Natasha leaned forward.
And kissed his cheek. Bearded, bloodied, and wonderfully Steve.
āNo matter what.ā
A fresh set of tears coursed down Steveās cheeks. He leaned forward and laid his head against Natashaās chest, weeping.
Natasha wrapped her arms around him and ran her hand through his blonde locks.
His arms wrapped around her. He leaned against her, his tears, his sobs, causing Natashaās own tears to fall.
She kissed the top of his head.
āItās okay, Steve. Iām not going anywhereā¦ā
She wrapped her arms tighter around Steve.
Slowly rocked him back and forth.
And nothing on earth could ever make her let go.
August 12, 2022 at 9:20 am #115110Anonymous
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August 18, 2022 at 1:03 pm #115409Anonymous
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@freedomwriter76 (HOW DID I MISS THIS?!) OMGOSH SO SAD!!!!!!!!!! *sobs* And yet so precious. They’re so sweeeeeeet!!!
August 18, 2022 at 1:27 pm #115419Anonymous
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@gracie-j. (You’re Good, Girl! ?) IKR!? ? *grabs them both and hugs them tight* YES, SO, SO SWEET! ? Thank you so much! ??
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