Garden.
By Daisy Torres
You entered our world like a blooming gold flower.
Why do petals wither and die?
You entered our world like an autumn leaf, twirling.
Why do leaves crash and burn?
Time is a tricky thing, it takes and it grows.
Time is a sad thing, when the one you love goes.
Snowflakes melt when their time is up.
But from Winter comes Spring, and that’s true for all things.
Our love for you, we’ll store up.
We’ll water the earth with our tears, in hopes that a flower will appear.
Someday I know our garden will grow, full of laughter, not sorrow.
For now it pains us to watch you go, but we’ll meet again some ‘morrow.
Though your time with us wasn’t short, perhaps that makes it all the worse.
To love a lovely thing, and to watch it thirst.
You won’t see us cry, and you knew you were loved.
But if actions speak louder than words, can you hear me from where you transferred?
And if speech is so powerful, then where was my power in words?
We’ll meet again, some lovely blue ‘morrow.
The skies will be clear, our gardens, all wonder.
But until that day comes, these words I’ve written in sorrow.
Until that day comes, I know the One who loves me dear.
Who holds me close in times of fear.
I know the One who wipes my tears.
He speaks of love when I can’t hear.
Gently, a winter wind blows.
Following grows a red and green rose.
I’m watching this garden as the year draws to a close.
Someday we’ll sing songs rich with promise.
But for now, I’m still waiting.
Still, and morose.
Daisy Torres
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Daisy, that was beautiful. Whenever your loss was, or who it was, I feel you. And I know and understand the feeling. The way you expressed it is just stunningly beautiful, you are truly gifted. I normally don’t connect that well with poetry, but your poem touched my heart. I love it! Thanks for having the courage to share it with us😊. God hears your pain, and your love. I’m praying that He will give you comfort, and fill you with his hope and love. It’s been over 4 years now since I lost someone, and I still feel it almost every day. Bless you.
Awee, thank you very much <3 God bless you as well, and bring you comfort and peace!!
Wow, Daisy! That was amazing! Great job!
Aww I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thanks <3
This poem really does feel like you are walking through a garden throughout the seasons. It’s truly so beautiful and touching.
Thank you!!
Wow! Is this from a true story? This is great!
This is a very touching and beautiful poem, wonderful work, Daisy!:)
Thank you for sharing Daisy! It is a beautiful poem. This touched my heart in a special way as someone I loved passed away just a couple days ago.
This is a beautiful poem, I love it!