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September 1, 2021 at 9:59 pm #104101
Hi all,
I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reading the first chapter of The Inventor’s Daughter! This is my first time asking for a critique so it’s pretty exciting! Let me know and I can share it by email. I would like it to be read before Friday afternoon if not that’s ok!
God bless!
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September 1, 2021 at 11:23 pm #104103@maryg3 Ooh that’s so exciting! I’d love to read it. My email is jodiwrites21@gmail.com 🙂
September 1, 2021 at 11:43 pm #104104Anonymous
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ME ME ME!!! I totally wanna read it! Unfortunately though, I probably could not get done by Friday because I’m pretty busy doing stuff with my school. I still would love to read it. My email is discipleshipwithjoy@gmail.com. But if you can’t send it over, I totally understand. Deadlines are pressing. 🙂
September 1, 2021 at 11:44 pm #104105@maryg3 Aww, congrats on your first critique request! I’d love to volunteer! My email is authordaisytorres.1@gmail.com
"It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."
September 2, 2021 at 12:42 pm #104109Ooh, this is exiting! I have the time and I’d love to read it! Here’s my email: AnatraBreathesBooks@gmail.com
September 2, 2021 at 2:27 pm #104113Ooh I want to read it!! I think I can get it done by Friday. I love your title by the way. My email is nanisnook@att.net
Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10
September 2, 2021 at 3:48 pm #104116Do you want me to share comments on here or by email?
Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10
September 2, 2021 at 4:15 pm #104122By email would be great!! Thanks!
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September 2, 2021 at 4:17 pm #104123I forgot to mention that my book is a Christian fiction novel, about finding God and her true family! Like a conversion/coming of age book!;)
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September 2, 2021 at 4:25 pm #104124@maryg3 Okay! Will do
Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10
September 2, 2021 at 5:05 pm #104125I would love to do it! The only issue is about the email thing. I’ve only told my email address to a select few, very trusted friends, and I honestly don’t trust people I don’t know very well in real life. (Not that I don’t trust you, but I don’t want to get into the habit of giving personal information out to others online). Is there some other way to do it?
Gerald handled that. You don’t question Gerald. (if you know you know)
September 2, 2021 at 8:30 pm #104135Oh, how exciting!!! I wish I could, but I don’t think I’d be able to get it read in time. 🙁 I wish you the best, though! Go get ’em! 🙂
September 2, 2021 at 11:43 pm #104143No worries! Thanks! But if you still want to read it after Friday I’m fine with that too:)
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September 2, 2021 at 11:45 pm #104144Oh I totally understand!! That’s ok!:) I don’t think these another way! A least not that I know of!?♀️
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September 3, 2021 at 7:22 am #104146@maryg3 Hey, awesome! I’d love to read it, but unfortunately I don’t like putting my email out in public places. Could you perhaps make a Google form or something for us to input our emails into? That’s what I would do, anyways.
Lately, it's been on my brain
Would you mind letting me know
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