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    Mary G
    @maryg3
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      Hi all,

      I was wondering if anyone would be interested in reading the first chapter of The Inventor’s Daughter! This is my first time asking for a critique so it’s pretty exciting! Let me know and I can share it by email. I would like it to be read before Friday afternoon if not that’s ok!

      God bless!

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      #104103
      Jodi Maile
      @jodi-maile
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        @maryg3 Ooh that’s so exciting! I’d love to read it. My email is jodiwrites21@gmail.com 🙂

        #104104
        Anonymous
          • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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          @maryg3

          ME ME ME!!! I totally wanna read it! Unfortunately though, I probably could not get done by Friday because I’m pretty busy doing stuff with my school. I still would love to read it. My email is discipleshipwithjoy@gmail.com. But if you can’t send it over, I totally understand. Deadlines are pressing. 🙂

          #104105
          Daisy Torres
          @daisy-torres
            • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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            @maryg3 Aww, congrats on your first critique request! I’d love to volunteer! My email is authordaisytorres.1@gmail.com

            "It's easy to be caught up in stardust and whispers when reality is so dark and loud."

            #104109
            Anatra
            @anatra23
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              @maryg3

              Ooh, this is exiting! I have the time and I’d love to read it! Here’s my email: AnatraBreathesBooks@gmail.com

              #104113
              Natalie C.
              @nanisnook
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                @maryg3

                Ooh I want to read it!! I think I can get it done by Friday. I love your title by the way. My email is nanisnook@att.net

                Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10

                #104116
                Natalie C.
                @nanisnook
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                  @maryg3

                  Do you want me to share comments on here or by email?

                  Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10

                  #104122
                  Mary G
                  @maryg3
                    • Rank: Wise Jester
                    • Total Posts: 90

                    @nanisnook

                    By email would be great!! Thanks!

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                    #104123
                    Mary G
                    @maryg3
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                      • Total Posts: 90

                      I forgot to mention that my book is a Christian fiction novel, about finding God and her true family! Like a conversion/coming of age book!;)

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                      #104124
                      Natalie C.
                      @nanisnook
                        • Rank: Loyal Sidekick
                        • Total Posts: 154

                        @maryg3 Okay! Will do

                        Be still and know that I am God. Psalm 46:10

                        #104125
                        Keilah H.
                        @keilah-h
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                          I would love to do it! The only issue is about the email thing. I’ve only told my email address to a select few, very trusted friends, and I honestly don’t trust people I don’t know very well in real life. (Not that I don’t trust you, but I don’t want to get into the habit of giving personal information out to others online). Is there some other way to do it?

                          Gerald handled that. You don’t question Gerald. (if you know you know)

                          #104135
                          Lydia S.
                          @lydia-s
                            • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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                            @maryg3

                            Oh, how exciting!!! I wish I could, but I don’t think I’d be able to get it read in time. 🙁 I wish you the best, though! Go get ’em! 🙂

                            #104143
                            Mary G
                            @maryg3
                              • Rank: Wise Jester
                              • Total Posts: 90

                              @lydia-s

                              No worries! Thanks! But if you still want to read it after Friday I’m fine with that too:)

                               

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                              #104144
                              Mary G
                              @maryg3
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                                @keilah-h

                                Oh I totally understand!! That’s ok!:) I don’t think these another way! A least not that I know of!?‍♀️

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                                #104146
                                Lin
                                @devastate-lasting
                                  • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
                                  • Total Posts: 1700

                                  @maryg3 Hey, awesome! I’d love to read it, but unfortunately I don’t like putting my email out in public places. Could you perhaps make a Google form or something for us to input our emails into? That’s what I would do, anyways.

                                  Lately, it's been on my brain
                                  Would you mind letting me know
                                  If hours don't turn into days

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