RAE

So his mood probably won’t improve while Mayfly’s around.

@keilah-h

Silvanis  is the type who has the understanding of a child sometimes. The type that drives writers insane.

Mayfly

Why am I being so serious? He doesn’t look like he’s dying, and Hunter’s not worried. So mustn’t be. I’m imagining stuff! What fun!

Mayfly smiled. Case closed. She clapped her hands together for effect of closing a bo…[Read more]

Can’t believe I didn’t catch this the first read-through

 maybe he brought a pet with him

Mayfly a pet! 🤣🤣🤣 For some reason that’s just really funny! I like it👍

@keilah-h

Silvanis

“Oh, it’s a little wingless creature, kind of like you.”

Was that an insult? Silvanis didn’t pay attention to the rest of what Jaylen and the other dragon were saying. I’m nothing like that little girl! Our hair isn’t even the same color! 

Silvanis put his hand on the wall and used his other arm to pull his knife from the…[Read more]

@theducktator

He’s cute. XD.

Never expected that reaction…XD

One thing though, usually when people smile I only see one row of teeth.

True. Though, I was known for a ridiculously large smile when I was little(r) so large both rows were at least partly visible. And that one stupid canine tooth that grew faster than my other teeth that for a w…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

To clarify, this scene comes before the last one I shared.

Mandin already knew Nahim was a Nayhelm, that’s why he showed the article to Mandin. He’s also being casual because for one he’s tired, he got very little sleep, and for two, he hasn’t promised to tell Mandin yet, and Mandin often asks him every few days/weeks in tiny s…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @myself @whoever

I didn’t forget! (Completely. Had a lot of stuff going on in my house, so it kinda got pushed on the back burner for the last few days) I have been thinking of a goal. Unfortunately, my previous plans all include at least a singular villain as my stories usually go. I do not want this…[Read more]

@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium

Skin walkers are from Native American mythology. If I remember correctly, they are cursed men/spirits who can shape shift into creepy animals. They harm humans, and while having a human form, their human form doesn’t look totally human. But the scariest thing at all is how hushhush the Natives are about them. The…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I think you probably already thought of this, but Eric would probably try to frame Riker. Get Riker on everyone’s bad side.

Steal cigarettes and put them in Riker’s stuff. Dirty uniforms and leave some trace of Riker behind. Rummage belongings. That kinda stuff.

I think that could go under three of the bullet notes you have,…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @keilah-h @theducktator

 
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Yeah, I’m bothering everyone again. I like the idea of this scene, but I feel like it has some major problems. I want to see if any of you notice it, since I’ve found more than once that I stress over things that others are like “…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

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@theducktator

I kind of didn’t trust him. If he continued to be this kind I would come to love him though. I just have trust issues with nice characters. XD. They’re so often evil.

That cracked me up. Mostly from surprise. Mandin is nice like that all the time, with sparks of extreme loyalty readers see here and there at the right times. He als…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

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@whalekeeper @loopylin

Chase

Chase reached into his pocket and silently pulled out his phone that he had grabbed from the floor before the three of them left the scene. He held it where the girl could see it, before sliding it back into his pocket.

“We, we need to…” He pointed to the doorway. “T-teachers, sta, stew, stu-dents find us.”

@everyone

Thanks for answering my questions, it meant a lot.

And yes, it is a violin.

@freed_and_redeemed

Yessssss, very much so! I really loved the body language and it really conveyed Nahim’s feelings/emotions/fears for sure!

Good. I was worried it was kinda unclear.

A Violinnnnnnnnn (and I was over here excited, like: HEYYY, RIKER PLAYS VIOLIN!! XD)

No way! That’s amazing! Idk even how to react, that’s just SO GREAT! And I’m o…[Read more]