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    Hannah
    @salome01w4g
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    @catwing I’m review reading if you still here!!

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    Catwing
    @catwing
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    Yep. Fortunately he is alive this point, so it didn’t kill him. *mystery*
    Bye @dragon-snapper

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    Catwing
    @catwing
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    @salome01w4g Welcome.

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    Jane Maree
    @jane-maree
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    @catwing @salome01w4g I am here to join you! I’ll be critiquing/editing.

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    Catwing
    @catwing
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    @jane-maree Welcome as well!
    I’m editing too. Got three done so far. On chapter 22! The suspense rises and I’m excited too. *rubs hands* And it just gets better.

    #47668

    Hannah
    @salome01w4g
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    @jane-maree welcome, welcome *hands thee some ginger tea*

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    Hannah
    @salome01w4g
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    @catwing I ended up writing a poem….
    Quiet and shy he sit’s in a corner afraid,
    Quiet and shy they’re in the open seeking a friend.
    Loneliness encompasses them unsure of the next step,
    surrounded but alone, laughter, but it’s hallow.
    Sleep but it’s restless, dreams that remind of a life they loved.
    Lord give them words to speak and courage to move,
    strength to chip away the cold shell.
    Boldness, without fear of what may happen.
    Befriend, the one you wish was a friend, accept him for what he is.
    One once was told, someone needs to meet you and needs you as their friend.
    Lord is this the one? Show me who, I need to be a friend to!
    Is the cry of that heart.

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    Jane Maree
    @jane-maree
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    @catwing sounds like fun!! I’m halfway through chapter 37 (of Hope Ann’s novel Fidelyon) and it’s pretty good. *nodnod*

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    Hannah
    @salome01w4g
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    @jane-maree and @catwing I’m leaving you two now I can barely see straight I’m so tired. Good night!!

    #47672

    Jane Maree
    @jane-maree
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    @salome01w4g alrighty! Sleep well, girl. *waves*

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    Catwing
    @catwing
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    Nice! @salome01w4g Good night.
    @jane-maree That’s good.

    #47674

    Catwing
    @catwing
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    @jane-maree it’s late. I have to go. I did a total of four chapters, editing. Finished 22! Bye.

    #47675

    Jane Maree
    @jane-maree
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    @catwing yay good job! See you around. 🙂

    #47703

    Elizabeth
    @that_writer_girl_99
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    I’ll be worldbuilding for awhile if anyone wants to join me. @shannon @dragon-snapper @xonos-darkgrate

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    The Magistrate
    @xonos-darkgrate
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    Worldbuilding? What’s that? As in Minecraft? Or is that a writer’s term I haven’t heard before? @that_writer_girl_99 ?

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