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    SeekJustice
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    Here’s its link if you want to have a look.

    https://anordinarypen.wordpress.com

    I’m just  trying to get some posts scheduled before I go away after Christmas.

    INFP with an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

    #57396

    Emily
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    @dekreel Sorry. I had to have dinner, then dishes. 😉 Why thank you. @shannon‘s helped me a lot with some of the plot issues I’ve had. We like to write in our treehouse, and since I don’t like to be alone for very long (ESFJ that I am ;)) it works out great. I can ask her all the questions I want. 😀

    Btw, congrats on your word count! That’s awesome!

    MBTI: ESFJ-T
    Title: The Perfect Grammatacallion

    #57398

    Catwing
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    @shannon @emily @seekjustice
    @dekreel (Have I shown up in your KPA yet?)
    I’m editing my Kapeefer Literature.
    If you guys want to critic it…
    A Catwing Christmas

    Ambassador of the Kingdom of Allore
    Writing a Catwing Christmas that is as madder as the hatter.

    #57399

    Alia
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    Hey all, I left to watch the new star wars movie and never signed off. But I am back now

    A KP Ranger and Sister of the Herons
    INTP sister to an INTJ...
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    #57401

    Catwing
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    Welcome @alia
    You can look at the link too if you want.

    Ambassador of the Kingdom of Allore
    Writing a Catwing Christmas that is as madder as the hatter.

    #57402

    Alia
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    @catwing, YAY

     

    A KP Ranger and Sister of the Herons
    INTP sister to an INTJ...
    mirakrin.wordpress.com

    #57405

    Shannon
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    @catwing *applauds* very good. I did change the spelling of Ethryndal. You kept spelling it with a e instead of a y. So I added a couple suggestions to fix it ; )

    MBTI: ENTP
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    #57406

    Alia
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    @catwing, its good, really good.

    A KP Ranger and Sister of the Herons
    INTP sister to an INTJ...
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    #57408

    Catwing
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    @shannon Thanks! I forgot how you spelled her name. *nervous laughter*
    @alia Thank you!
    Do you guys have any suggestions for this one or the next one?

    Ambassador of the Kingdom of Allore
    Writing a Catwing Christmas that is as madder as the hatter.

    #57409

    SeekJustice
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    @catwing I really enjoyed it, but I thought you rushed the ending a bit, so maybe you could lengthen it a tad?

    Other than that it was really good and it stayed true to the spirit of Kapeefer. 🙂

    INFP with an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

    #57410

    Alia
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    @catwing, I agree with @seekjustice with it feeling rushed, but it also didn’t feel much like an ending

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    INTP sister to an INTJ...
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    #57411

    Dekreel
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    @catwing YAYYY! Your KPA!

    @seekjustice  Can I see your blog please? 😀

    Pronounced DEE-kreel. ENFJ -T (or am I an ENFP...?)

    #57412

    Catwing
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    @seekjustice alrighty then I’ll make it less rushed. (Yeah I did rush cause it’s a bit of a Christmas story *shrug*)
    Thank you. *florishes a bow* More is yet to come.
    Sorry y’all haven’t showed up yet (also @shannon @alia )
    Anything you want in there?

    Ambassador of the Kingdom of Allore
    Writing a Catwing Christmas that is as madder as the hatter.

    #57413

    Catwing
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    @alia There will be more parts that’s why it isn’t much of an ending.
    I will fix the rush!
    @dekreel did you read it? What do you think?

    Ambassador of the Kingdom of Allore
    Writing a Catwing Christmas that is as madder as the hatter.

    #57414

    Alia
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    @catwing, yes, in fact. if I’m in the next one make me the perfect character. kidding, that would be boring.

    Oh, theres a cliché for you. the perfect boring character that accidentally makes into every book that the author thinks is going to be everyones favorite character. but is really everyones least favorite.

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    INTP sister to an INTJ...
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