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    Catwing
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    @his-instrument When you want a message delivered don’t use pigeons. They won’t deliver anything for me. *frowns* They will also gossip away Intel. If a pigeon betrays me, I might eat it… Yes, they are ridiculous.
    @warrenluther04 There’s an idea. Pigeons that work for the cats, but are scared of them.
    And Beatrix Potter has a story where two rats kidnap a kitten… In dough.

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    WarrenLuther04
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    @catwing Uhh, okay??? *grins* Actually, that’s a really good idea. Thanks!

    @his-instrument Maybe I could use sock monkeys as a villain company….. So many ideas! Thanks!

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    WarrenLuther04
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    @catwing Which Beatrix Potter story? I cannot recall a title….. The pigeon idea’s really funny. Thanks!

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    Dragon Snapper
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    @catwing Agh! I remember that story with the kitty! I read that story so much. Well, actually, I mainly just looked at the pictures, but anywho. Yes. I remember that one. 😛

    *melts chair*

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    Dragon Snapper
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    @warrenluther04 @catwing Oh, and I’d be careful using pigeon’s as cat minions because they are afraid of them, not because it’s a bad idea in the least, but because it is vaguely parallel to Bolt, where Mittens the cat uses the pigeons to get her food and she doesn’t eat them in turn. Have either of you seen that?

    *melts chair*

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    Catwing
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    @dragon-snapper Yes. I saw Bolt.🙂 Wasn’t thinking of that then though. *shruggs* Poor Mittens.

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    Catwing
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    Mittens needed food and a reputation as dangerous, because *spoiler!*. *nodds* Otherwise she could’ve starved…

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    WarrenLuther04
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    @dragon-snapper Actually, I have not…. But thanks for the idea!

    Sorry for replying late, everyone.

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    DelightInLife
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    @warrenluther04

    I really like Kate Flournoy’s idea of a sly sophisticated mouse causing mischief. Sounds like a unique idea! Have fun exploring & writing! 🙂

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    WarrenLuther04
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    @delightinlife Thanks! I’m glad so many people like this idea, this is really encouraging! 😀

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