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April 16, 2016 at 9:53 am #11313
Yep, itβs me. I love using the word welp.
So Iβm in trouble again. ??? Thankfully itβs not that bad though. ?
So my trouble is that I hate to ask anything. Thankfully though, Iβm also a philosopher and my philosophical self is telling me, βSelf, donβt worry about it. Just use the principles of fair trade. A good deal makes anyone happy.β And so being rather fond of my philosopher self, I took his advice.
So basically, I just finished a big fat self edit of my novella. Itβs a lot better, but I think Iβve still got some work to go. So hereβs where the deal part of it comes in. I love editing other peopleβs stories just as much as I like to see all the great ideas and revisions on mine, so if any of you are like that too (or if you just want to put me in your debt) just let me know and Iβm all cool with trading.
By the way, in case youβre wondering about time β this isnβt anything to sweat over. In fact, itβs only like 15,000 words β thatβs about a sixth the length of a standard novel.
So with that β¦
*Puts on hoodie* Grace peace and high word counts be multiplied upon you.
Aaaahh! Itβs so hard to press the submit button. *Threatens self with abstention from raspberries. Presses button*
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April 16, 2016 at 11:02 am #11314Ah, I know EXACTLY how you feel about asking things like this, @Daeus. Really, I feel the same way. Congratulations on working up the nerve to press submit. π I never could have done it.
And count me in. You and I are already going to be trading edits and such with our other works, so whatβs one more? This is βTreachery against the house of Fairwinβ, is it not? Iβd love to see how you improved it.
Besides, Iβm editing my own work right now and itβll make me feel better to pick holes in someone elseβs work at the same time. π π
@kate-flournoy Thanks! What word processor do you use? Iβm having a bit of computer trouble now so it might be a bit before I can get it to you.
Yeah, it is TATHOF.
Here, take some virtual ice cream. ????????????????????????????????????
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April 16, 2016 at 12:24 pm #11317*gathers up virtual ice cream in arms, gulps it all down in the blink of an eye* Delicious!
Corel WordPerfect, but I have MSword as well. No rush. π
@daeus Iβd be glad to give your master piece a going through if youβd like another reader! Although I donβt have anything to trade right now, but thatβs okay cause I like editing other peopleβs work. I may have to work on it kinda slowly right now, but I would have more time late spring. π
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April 17, 2016 at 8:52 pm #11350@rolena-hatfield Thanks, that would be really helpful. Actually, if now is a little busy for you, how about I just send you the document after Kateβs already made her edits. That way you wouldnβt have to point out everything she already got. Oh, yeah, and what word processing system do you use?
I guess Kate ate all 36 soft serves, so Iβll just have to give you sundays. ??????????????????
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April 17, 2016 at 10:13 pm #11353Iβll settle for sundaes anytime! *licks lips and goes to get actual ice cream but is too sick to eat after gulping down 18 virtual sundaes*
Oh and I use Microsoft Word.
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April 17, 2016 at 11:17 pm #11363*runs in* I heard the word βsick.β *shakes finger at you, @rolena-hatfield* You shouldnβt eat so many sundaes in one go. Itβs not good for you. *shakes head sadly* Pop them into the virtual freezer and eat them slowly. One per week. *writes it on paper and hands it to you.*
April 18, 2016 at 12:11 pm #11370@bluejay I may take you on as my full time physician. I like your prescriptions. π
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April 18, 2016 at 4:46 pm #11391HAHA! @rolena-hatfield. Hmmβ¦that might be bit hard as I donβt live near you. π
April 18, 2016 at 4:51 pm #11392@bluejay Thatβs okay. Iβll just tell you what Iβm feeling and you can tell me whatβs wrong with me! And if you HAVE to look down my throat I guess we could do a video chat :p
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April 18, 2016 at 7:23 pm #11398Oh boy! @rolena-hatfield I guess I should brush up and medical terms. *Hunts around for doctoring books; starts reading. Raises eyebrow βIβm really not understanding any of this.β*
I guess I had better stick to easy things such as colds and stomach aches. πApril 18, 2016 at 9:08 pm #11413@Daeus I would love to help if you arenβt in a hurry. I donβt currently have anything to trade, but maybe in a little bit I will
April 18, 2016 at 9:15 pm #11415@jadamae Thanks very much. That would be fantastilicious. Iβm having trouble with some application stuff, so Iβll just send it as a pdf if thatβs ok.
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April 18, 2016 at 9:17 pm #11417Oh, and I forgot, cookies for you. ????????????????????
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