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September 20, 2017 at 4:22 pm #44167
@kate-flournoy Okay. How about this one?
βTime Turns Againβ
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September 20, 2017 at 4:24 pm #44168Or this:
βThe first and second time travelβ
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September 20, 2017 at 4:28 pm #44169Or this:
βTime is a harsh masterβ
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September 20, 2017 at 4:34 pm #44170Well, with the first one, Time Turns Again, it seems pretty cool, but I like the third one, Time is a Harsh Masterβ¦although, I think it might work better as βHarsh Masterβ insteadβ¦.*shrugs* Titles.
When you sent me the document you said, βHi D.G., welcome to my book.β Maybe you should call it βMy Bookβ? XD
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September 20, 2017 at 4:35 pm #44171September 20, 2017 at 4:36 pm #44172@dragon-snapper I like the third one too.
I also thought I should change the second one to just: βThe second time travelβ
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September 20, 2017 at 4:51 pm #44173@daeus Thereβs also, βWho He Was.β Not sure why I thought of thatβ¦.it could apply to either the MC or the Villain. *more shrugs*
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September 20, 2017 at 4:54 pm #44174And an alternative would be βTime is a taskmasterβ
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September 20, 2017 at 6:59 pm #44191βThe Time Traveler Who Wasnβt Readyβ
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September 20, 2017 at 7:21 pm #44198@Daeus I like both Time Turns Again (*small feelz attack* IT TIES WITH THE LAST LINE YOU SEE) and The Time Traveler Who Wasnβt Ready. The othersβ¦ not so much. They just donβt fit the action feel of the story. Philosophy is all well and good (obviously, knowing me π ) but the primary focus of this story, Iβd say, is on the action/adventure. The title should reflect that.
β¦ The Time Traveler Who Wasnβt Ready is really starting to grow on me though.
Time is a Harsh Master/Taskmaster sounds too much like a nonfiction self-help book. π
See, INFPs may not be natural leaders⦠but we wield the power of veto like a boss. *echoing evil laughter*
@kate-flournoy The Time Traveler Who Wasnβt Ready actually ties in with the almost last line.
βArt ready, sir?β
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September 20, 2017 at 8:36 pm #44218@Daeus ooooooohhhhhh⦠ooh wow. Mm. Yes. I like. The only problem I have with that one is it does seem a little long. Any way around that, do you think?
@kate-flournoy Possibly. I mean, certainly, but I donβt know if the other options will sound good. βThe unready time travelerβ doesnβt strike me as very good. π
Anyway, I donβt think length is a very big problem. Iβll think through alternatives though.
What do the rest of you think of this title? @hope @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @graciegirl @dragon-snapper @northerner @josiahdeboer @emily @catwing @anyone-else
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