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    Dragon Snapper
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    @anne-of-lothlorien This is great!!! You’re character in Ali is great! Even from the beginning I feel terrible that she has to go through that with her family. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

    *melts chair*

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    Louise Fowler
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    @anne-of-lothlorien That’s an amazing little story, Anne! I loved it! I also love how her name is Ali, similar to Alice 😉

    Currently reading The Count of Monte Cristo

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    Anne of Lothlorien
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    @dragon-snapper I don’t know if there will be a ‘what happens next’. I can’t think of a way to continue or prelude her story without ruining it.

    ENFP - "One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."

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    Dragon Snapper
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    @anne-of-lothlorien Hmm…maybe Dean isn’t actually a friendly. Ooh! Maybe he’s the Mad Hatter! Maybe he kidnaps her!

    *melts chair*

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    Anne of Lothlorien
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    “a friendly”…
    Hmmm, I like that word. Friendly as a noun…

    My friend and I came up with a new word. Starealyze, pronounced just like sterilize. It means to paralyze someone by staring at them. (Which I can do quite well). Stare + Paralyze = Starealyze.

    ENFP - "One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."

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