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    Kate Flournoy
    @kate-flournoy
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      Maybe my obsession with psychology… or those of us who are devoted Kylo Ren fans as opposed to otherwise. :’D

      Elizabeth
      @that_writer_girl_99
        • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
        • Total Posts: 1819

        I think a dig at the unnecessary drama of the Twilight-style love triangle would be funny…
        I just finished reading the series and any dig at the books would be welcome… *gags*

        Writer. Dreamer. Sometimes blogger. MBTI mess. Lover of Jesus and books.

        #29703
        Christine Eaton
        @christi-eaton
          • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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          Oh, there are so many good things, I don’t know if it’s actually known on the forum yet but I am Sarah’s confetti apprentice. Also we need to incorporate Brianna slaughtering bad grammar wherever she goes. And dude, can there please be an awkward love triangle that never goes anywhere? Cause I think that would be funny.

          Theater kid. Currently depressed because I can't stop listening to sad musicals.

          #29704
          Anonymous
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            • Total Posts: 1486

            @dragon-snapper An evil mustache-twirling cat-petting villain.

            #29705
            Snapper
            @dragon-snapper
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              • Total Posts: 3515

              @christi-eaton @that_writer_girl_99 Oh man, I’ve never written a romance.
              I’ve got Brianna covered with the bad grammar.
              @winter-rose Priceless.

              @kate-flournoy
              One MBTI all knowing character coming right up.

              You guys are awesome for inspiration.

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              #29707
              Kate Flournoy
              @kate-flournoy
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                @Dragon-Snapper *bows, flourishes cape* Awesome is after all our job description. XD

                Hope Ann
                @hope
                  • Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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                  @dragon-snapper A villain’s minions who are great shots. Also a petition to include @Michael-stanton as the evil overlord. And possibly give Josiah a brother who contradicts him at every turn and is obsessed with hair-styles (all kinds on everybody). XD

                  INTJ - Inhumane. No-feelings. Terrible. Judgment and doom on everyone.

                  #29710
                  Anon
                  @theliterarycrusader
                    • Rank: Wise Jester
                    • Total Posts: 64

                    @dragon-snapper You can study the Meet the Staff page to see who’s on the KP team. XD The only person currently missing is our new web developer.

                    I pretty much always wear purple, my middle name is Storm, and my superhero name amongst the team is “Healer of the Broken,” just in case those are details worth noting. 😉

                    I second the vote for the inclusion of confetti. I think it would be interesting if Sarah were a farmer who cultivates a plant that produces confetti, and Christi helps her harvest it. 😛

                    #29714
                    Jess
                    @jess
                      • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
                      • Total Posts: 575

                      @dragon-snapper You should have someone who disappears in a cloud of glitter/pickles/or flames. I vote for a sequel too.

                      #29715
                      Anon
                      @theliterarycrusader
                        • Rank: Wise Jester
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                        @dragon-snapper Oh, one more suggestion: give me a sidekick that’s a squirrel. I have a friend who would appreciate it. 😉

                        #29723
                        Snapper
                        @dragon-snapper
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                          @theliterarycrusader Interesting request. I shall be done, my liege. On the point of confetti, I already have a name for the farm: KeePer Confetti Farms.

                          @jess
                          I like the disappearing thing. Maybe that’s how Josiah disappears and appears so quickly.

                          @hope
                          Haha! @michael-stanton If you read the previous story which this entire thread is about, you’ll understand this request. Would you like to be Thray’s second in command? If you don’t, and you’d rather be a Knight, there are many other troll things who wouldn’t mind the job either. 😛

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                          #29727
                          Christine Eaton
                          @christi-eaton
                            • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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                            @dragon-snapper I am actually very excited to see how this new short story turns out. 😀

                            Theater kid. Currently depressed because I can't stop listening to sad musicals.

                            #29728
                            Daeus
                            @daeus
                              • Rank: Chosen One
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                              @dragon-snapper, @jane-maree should be a super stereotypical Australian with neat Aussie way of saying things.

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                              #29729
                              Audrey Caylin
                              @audrey-caylin
                                • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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                                @dragon-snapper I’m late in seeing this, but yes, definitely a sequel!

                                Well…I wouldn’t want anyone to have to die, but a cliched mentor death might be funny 😉

                                #29730
                                Audrey Caylin
                                @audrey-caylin
                                  • Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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                                  @dragon-snapper oh, wait, have a fake death xD A really obvious one.

                                  I’ll stop now before you’re overwhelmed with everyone’s ideas. I can’t wait for this new story!

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