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  • #35169
    Snapper
    @dragon-snapper
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      @emma-flournoy Ah yes. I had to make Stanton an evil overlord somehow. 😀

      @daeus
      *races ice cream cone to cliche* Hurrah! (I hope you don’t mind being captured. 😀 )

      @delightinlife
      Don’t worry! There are some coconut milk ice creams in my house too. 😀

      @mariposa
      Do dragons count as dinosaurs?

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      #35170
      Snapper
      @dragon-snapper
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        @daeus I have to know…when you were at your KP meeting thing, did anyone call you King Daeus, or did anyone call @aratrea the Wiser?

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        #35171
        Daeus
        @daeus
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          @dragon-snapper I might have been called King Daeus once, but I can’t remember clearly. I know we called Josiah The Wiser a couple times. 😉

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          #35174
          Mariposa Aristeo
          @mariposa
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            @Dragon-Snapper Hmm…Dragons kind of count as dinosaurs. I guess I’ll just have to settle for dragons for now. 😉

            #35177
            Emma Flournoy
            @emma-flournoy
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              Oh and yes @Dragon-Snapper, the Monte Cristo thing was so great.

              #35184
              Hope Ann
              @hope
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                This is just too funny. All the cliches and the soy ice cream and dragons and raspberries… XD If anyone asks what Kingdom Pen is, we should just send them to this story.

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                #35187
                Elizabeth
                @that_writer_girl_99
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                  Kate glanced at her. “But I’m the one who brought them in.”
                  Another knight, Elizabeth, pulled out her wallet. “I actually have a dragon riding license.”

                  The funny thing about this bit is that I don’t even have my regular driver’s license.

                  WOW @dragon-snapper you’ve done it again. This is amazing.

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                  #35188
                  Gracie
                  @graciegirl
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                    @Dragon-Snapper 😂😂😂😂😂
                    Oh, zikers, I LOVE IT!!!! Very rarely do I enjoy the sequels to stories, movies and er, anything, but I think I like this one even more than the first! Waaaayyy too many best lines to recount but the “you sicken me!” when Daeus saw the coffee is going down in my family’s Book of Quotes. 😆 (And I don’t get y’all’s hate of coffee. Mmmmm…☕️☕️☕️ 😉).

                    *hides pint of dairy-free dark chocolate ice cream behind her back* *chuckles nervously* oh, look at the time…😅

                    *is probably geeking out about something*

                    #35189
                    Elizabeth
                    @that_writer_girl_99
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                      COFFEE @graciegirl

                      Hey do you happen to have my Prison google doc open?

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                      #35190
                      Gracie
                      @graciegirl
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                        @That_Writer_Girl_99 ☕️😋 I can only have it every once in a while though. 😩 #foodsensitivites Same reason I can’t have ice cream with dairy. 😭

                        Er, no. I’m afraid not.

                        *is probably geeking out about something*

                        #35191
                        Elizabeth
                        @that_writer_girl_99
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                          Okay @graciegirl

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                          #35192
                          Anonymous
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                            @dragon-snapper I love it as always!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

                            #35193
                            Audrey Caylin
                            @audrey-caylin
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                              @dragon-snapper OMW I LOVE IT. XD With all the cliches and the thing with the ice cream… so awesome, so awesome <3

                              #35194
                              Elizabeth
                              @that_writer_girl_99
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                                After being on KP for a little longer…I can honestly say that you did a great job with the characterization in both stories @dragon-snapper

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                                #35229
                                Louise Fowler
                                @perfectfifths
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                                  @dragon-snapper Yay, yay, yay, yay!!! 😀 I loved it! So many funny lines that made me chuckle. 😉 “For once he’d like to see a villain do a big nod.” XDXDXD I love it, love it, love it! But now to the all-important question:

                                  Will there be more??? 😀 😀

                                  Currently reading Les Miserables

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