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  • #29671
    Ingrid
    @ingridrd
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      @dragon-snapper
      Well…
      So…
      Um..
      WOW.
      There are not words for how much I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!! Simply put, this is ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT. Period.
      As for my favorite line, I love all of the ones mentioned, but the last line…

      β€œI like your dragons.”

      …was one of the best. Perfect ending to an amazing story. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

      A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

      #29675
      Anonymous
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        @dragon-snapper I love this so much! :):) All the destroyed clichΓ©s, witty lines, and ice cream references… pure awesomeness! I vote for a sequel. πŸ™‚

        #29681
        Christine Eaton
        @christi-eaton
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          @theliterarycrusader Yes, a sequel is needed. It should have confetti. A lot of confetti. πŸ˜€ Also that quote is rather fantastic and now I’m picturing Josiah with a long beard and it’s quite an amusing thought πŸ˜€

          Theater kid. Currently depressed because I can't stop listening to sad musicals.

          #29683
          Daeus
          @daeus
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            @christi-eaton Lol. You need to draw a picture of that.

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            #29684
            Snapper
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              @northerner I actually haven’t read The Thirteen Clocks, though it sounds neat! I’ll have to check it out. And yeah, I figured it wouldn’t be as awesome in any other publishing situations, but I’ve had so much fun seeing your all’s reactions. I love to make people laugh.

              @emma-flournoy
              πŸ˜€ Glad you likey. When I wrote it, I knew that I had to include ice cream.

              @that_writer_girl_99
              I can’t pick a favorite either. πŸ˜›

              @perfectfifths
              Well, people certainly keep asking for a sequel. And I already have some ideas. πŸ˜›

              @audrey-caylin
              Hey, those paper airplanes will turn on you. πŸ˜‰

              @theliterarycrusader
              Ooh! I do like the sequel idea. It has piqued my interest considerably. Though I don’t know who all is on the team. Who? I might not be able to do everyone, just because it’d be quite confusing, but I’ll see what I can do. πŸ˜› I like that line too. I can’t stand spiders.

              @hope
              Awesome! So glad you enjoyed it.

              @ingridrd
              Yes! *fist pump* Another person likes it. πŸ˜€ When I first thought up that ending, I knew it was perfect.
              @winter-rose XD You’re not the only one with that request. I might have an angry mob on my hand if I don’t write one, eh @christi-eaton? πŸ˜‰

              @daeus
              With a frog on his head.

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              #29687
              Snapper
              @dragon-snapper
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                Alright. How many of you vote for a sequel?

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                #29688
                Daeus
                @daeus
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                  *quickly raises hand*

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                  #29689
                  Christine Eaton
                  @christi-eaton
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                    @daeus, yes, yes I should XD


                    @dragon-snapper
                    , I think it’s safe to assume everyone wants one.

                    Theater kid. Currently depressed because I can't stop listening to sad musicals.

                    #29690
                    Anonymous
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                      Aye.

                      #29691
                      Snapper
                      @dragon-snapper
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                        @jadamae Thank you so much!

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                        #29693
                        Snapper
                        @dragon-snapper
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                          @daeus Aha. Would like some more ice cream long with the sequel? πŸ˜›

                          @christi-eaton
                          Hahaha! Yeah…I’m not even sure why I asked that question. πŸ˜› Shall I say its unanimous?

                          Okay, as there will be an angry mob chasing me if I do not write a sequel, as it would seem, I clearly need to write one. I already have some ideas, but if any of you have any requests as to anything I should include. (@jane-maree I already have your motivational pizza) and @spradlin’s confetti, but if there’s anything else I’m missing, please tell me! If have any cliche’s I should make fun of, really any suggestions, let me know.


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                          #29694
                          Elizabeth
                          @that_writer_girl_99
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                            @dragon-snapper *hands you superhero cape of inspiration* (I’m making this a thing)

                            Writer. Dreamer. Sometimes blogger. MBTI mess. Lover of Jesus and books.

                            #29697
                            Anonymous
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                              @dragon-snapper Oooh could you somehow add Daeus’s obsession of The Count of Monte Cristo?

                              #29698
                              Snapper
                              @dragon-snapper
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                                @winter-rose Oh! Yes! That is an awesome idea! I know exactly what to do with it! *maniacal laugh* @daeus

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                                #29699
                                Kate Flournoy
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                                  @Dragon-Snapper I vote for a sequel! Ummm… I can’t think of anything right off the top of my head I particularly want, but I’ll let you know if I do. πŸ˜€

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