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  • #58248
    Anonymous
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      @dekreel, I know very little about harmony because I always sing melody. However, I like songs with harmony…Emily sings harmony, and my little brother Daniel is incredible at harmony!

      Ya, sometimes songs that are stuck in your head are irritated, but I’m not bothered by the one I currently have stuck in my head. It’s so awesome! Especially the guitar part. And her melody! Ah, it’s gorgeous. I could listen to it all day.

      #58275
      Sam Kowal
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        @shannon 😀 That is amazing! I really like it (Stan’s pretending he doesn’t, but he keeps reading it over and over)

        It definitely has the kind of feel that would totally fit you guys’ band, just from the lyrics, and it’s so beautiful

        That’s epic! I would be extremely excited, too. I work on melodies for my songs, but that’s the hardest part for me. I have tunes for around half of them

        I would love to have a Youtube channel, too 😀

        Problem is, I can’t really sing. I want to learn, though

        So… I could just put lyrics up online, or try to learn how to perform my own songs, and then put them up. XD. It’ll probably take me awhile, but I really want to do it

         

         

         

        *Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
        Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.

        #58277
        Anonymous
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          @sam-kowal Thanks! Yes, my teacher is going to write it in country/folk style! Tell Stan that if he doesn’t like it, it’s ok. I just won’t send him glitter for his birthday 😉

          Ya, if you could post the lyrics and the melody on youtube, then people who are addicted to singing (like me) could sing along! So, do you play guitar? I can’t remember…

          #58375
          Aislinn Mollisong
          @aislinn-mollisong
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            I’ve got rhythm in my blood and melodies in my thoughts.

            So yeah. But I can’t write songs.

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            #58384
            Alia
            @alia
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              @dekreel, @shannon, @sam-kowel,

              love your songes.

               

              here’s one I’m working on…

              V1

              Empty faces with empty smiles

              You just pass them by

              You could never understand them

              Unless you ask them why

              C

              Why do you hide

              why do you lie

              Why do you say everything is alright

              Why do you run

              Why do you cry

              Why don’t you show us who you really are

               

              Thats all I have finished right now, verse two isn’t wanting to make sense

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              #58495
              Joy
              @dekreel
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                @alia  I get ya X)

                That’s a beautiful song! Sorry I didn’t reply sooner…

                You can pronounce it however you want.

                #58533
                Alia
                @alia
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                  @dekreel, thanks. I actually had verse 2 ready and done and was about to post it when I realized that it would probably send a different message than was intended

                  WIP - Decisions
                  Kapeefer til we're old and grey

                  #58538
                  Joy
                  @dekreel
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                    @aislinn-mollisong

                    I’ve got rhythm in my blood and melodies in my thoughts.

                    That would actually make a good first line XD

                    @shannon  Is your family a musical family?

                    You can pronounce it however you want.

                    #58629
                    Sam Kowal
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                      @shannon Yep, I play guitar… more like I’m learning it right now

                      I can’t play super fast fingering

                      🙂 That’s another good idea. If I have enough time, I might try to that at some point.

                       


                      @aislinn-mollisong
                      XD XD @dekreel You’re right. That does sound like an awesome first line 😀 I wouldn’t be so sure you can’t write songs @aislinn-mollisong

                       


                      @alia
                      😀 Wow. I love that 😀

                      It reminds me of something meaningful and introspective

                      You should definitely finish it

                       

                      *Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
                      Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.

                      #59728
                      Aislinn Mollisong
                      @aislinn-mollisong
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                        So. I ended up writing some songs. Just some little snippets to put at the beginning of chapters. Here they are!

                         

                        ——-
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Born of cold</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Born of tears</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Born of gold</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Born of fears</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>The crown of kings, the golden greed</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Beware the tyrant cold</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>- The Tyrant’s Crown</p>
                        ———-
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Dance with me, my bonny lass</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Tu’la Ru’la Tu’la Lae</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Cast your cares and take a chance</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Tu’la Ru’la Tu’la Lae</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Nae other boys may dance with thee</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Tai’la Rai’la Tai’la Tae</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>For you alone will marry me</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Tai’la Rai’la Tai’la Tae</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>- Folk Song</p>
                        ———
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Adventure Bound! Ta’ru! Ta’rae!</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Adventure Found! Ta’rae! Ta’ru!</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Who cares if danger lies ahead?</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Who knows if there be food or bed?</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>For we have found Adventure, men!</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>Now Rangers forth! Ta’ru!</p>
                        <p style=”text-align: center;”>- Ranger’s Call To Arms</p>

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                        #59729
                        Aislinn Mollisong
                        @aislinn-mollisong
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                          Well, that failed.

                          ENTP, Aether-borg Hero with cape obsession and fascination with swords.
                          https://forums.theaetherli

                          #59767
                          Sam Kowal
                          @sam-kowal
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                            @aislinn-mollisong 😀 Now, you just need a nice heavy electronic beat to go along with a robot singing XD

                            Those are actually really neat, though. (Once you disregard the extra text XD) I love when stories have in-world songs and lore, it makes them feel much more rich and solid. And having them as chapter headings is a really good idea 😀

                            *Giarstanornarak tries to melt chair*
                            Also, Daeus has 22 turtles in his signature.

                            #70258
                            Alia
                            @alia
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                              Dang, this topic seemed to have died off…
                              <p style=”text-align: left;”>anyways, this is a song I wrote for the KP lyric contest that happened two years ago, and I just found it…</p>
                              <p style=”text-align: left;”>No Place Else
                              -Verse-
                              I’ve walked miles to nowhere
                              With no hope of going anywhere
                              I’m feeling kind of lonely
                              And think I might despair
                              Then I remember the stories my mom told
                              -Pre-Chorus-
                              Of a place where no one has any worries
                              There’s a place where your heart is free
                              And right now even if I don’t any thing else
                              I’d say I’ve found that place
                              -Chorus-
                              If there were any place I’d rather be
                              I think I’d stick with the Cross
                              The good old stories that I’ve heard
                              Yes there’s nowhere else I’d rather be
                              -Verse-
                              There’s no place I’d rather be
                              Than near that good old Cross
                              Where peace and joy can find me
                              And I can forget about my loss
                              Yes I know tears will be shed
                              my Savior will keep me safe
                              As long as I keep looking at the Cross
                              -Pre-Chorus-
                              There’s a place where no one has any worries
                              There’s a place where your heart is free
                              And right now even if I don’t any thing else
                              I’d say I’ve found that place

                              -Chorus-
                              If there were any place I’d rather be</p>
                              I think I’d stick with the Cross</p>
                              The good old stories that I’ve heard</p>
                              Yes there’s nowhere else I’d rather be</p>

                              • This reply was modified 5 years, 11 months ago by Alia.

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                              #70308
                              Ariel Ashira
                              @ariel-ashira
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                                @sam-kowal That song is just EPIC!!!  I love it!  Now I want the tune so I can sing it!


                                @dekreel
                                @alia Your songs are beautiful too!

                                I don’t play any instruments.  I just sing.  Sometime I’ll try to copy a song or two I have written on here if you like.

                                "In a mask, was he?"

                                #70313
                                Ariel Ashira
                                @ariel-ashira
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                                  @sam-kowal @alia @dekreel

                                  Okay, here’s one I wrote called “Home”.

                                  verse 1

                                  Wherever God has me, I will be home

                                  Wherever I find myself, I’ll make it home

                                  And as the winds that blow take me to places far and wide

                                  I’ll find a home whetever I find you.

                                   

                                  chorus

                                  Home is not a building or a place

                                  Home is a feeling of knowing you belong

                                  Home is an understanding, a security, a peace

                                  Home is being free and knowing here is where your meant to be.

                                   

                                  verse 2

                                  I will not be shaken without a home

                                  I defy, I wont hide, I’m willing to go

                                  And I know that wherever I may go I will be free

                                  Cause I’ll be home if your with me (chorus)

                                   

                                  verse 3

                                  God leads us where we least expect we’ll ever be

                                  He guides on on paths we’d never forsee

                                  He calls us to leave our homes and follow where He shows

                                  Until one day He takes us home to our final abode.

                                   

                                  bridge

                                  Through rugged terrain, through ice and rain

                                  Through winds of chance that blow

                                  Through desert sands, through barren lands

                                  Through forests, hills and snow…(chorus)

                                   

                                  Well, anyway.  By the way, Dekreel, I really love that bridge of the Kapeefer song! 😀

                                   

                                   

                                  "In a mask, was he?"

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