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    Mallory O’Bier
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    If you’re still looking for readers, @daeus , I’m more than willing.Β  My local librariesΒ have been a desert lately, so I’m good and bored and full of unrealistically high expectations.

    Which means I’m ripe for giving criticism– er, feedback. πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚

    #60423

    Daeus
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    @overcomer Great. πŸ˜€

    Here’s a doc for you.Β https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BIHK8v-ag07-tPraj6QWrbf_BVN2P_PjySIw87Ljfyg/edit?usp=sharing

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    Emma Flournoy
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    @daeus Ahh, I remember that post! It was intriguing. I’d like to do it, unless you’re already too swamped with beta-readers, in which case I’d still want to just read it. ;P

    #60485

    Daeus
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    @emma-flournoy Sure. You can share Mallory’s doc if you want. πŸ™‚

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    Emma Flournoy
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    @daeus OK.

    @overcomer If you see an Elizabeth Flournoy on your doc then, that’s me, using one of my sisters’ account because I don’t have one. Just so you’re warned, it’s not an intruding bot or anything. πŸ˜‰ And since it’s technically yours first, if you want I can wait to beta-read it ’til you’ve already done so, ’cause that’d be totally fine. I know sometimes it’s more difficult to form your own opinions on something when you see a bunch of someone else’s already, and I wouldn’t mind in the least either way.

    #60633

    Daeus
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    @emma-flournoy You know what, it’s no trouble. Have your own doc.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OAqB7pb5gPIiym4MdPWFI4vh6YuODlRFQjYcPPWUUpc/edit?usp=sharing

     

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    LivGiordano
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    I’m up for it if you still need readers, @daeus. I know you’ve already got a lot of people, so if not, that’s totally fine.

    #60732

    Emma Flournoy
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    @daeus Heh, all right. Thanks, I shall begin.

    #60789

    Hannah
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    @daeus if you need readers still, I’m in. Like Mallory my library has been dry of anything to read.

    ~Farmer, writer, aspiring midwife~
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    #61169

    Mallory O’Bier
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    Thanks for sharing your story with me, @daeus .Β  It’s beautiful, and I enjoyed reading it very much.Β  You should definitelyΒ publish it sometime. πŸ™‚

    #61180

    Daeus
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    Thanks,Β @overcomer πŸ™‚ Β I plan to soon.

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