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  • #59504

    Daeus
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    Hi KeePers,

    Some of you may remember a while ago when I posted the first chapter of a short story of diary entries from a character in a novel who doesn’t have a name.

    I’ve had the story complete for two months or so and I just finally gave it an edit, so now I’m ready to look for beta readers.

    If any of you are interested, it’s a truly short story — only about 3,000 words. It follows the of a character in a novel who struggles with the apparent cruelty of life. I think it turned out well, but we’ll see. 🙂

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    #59505

    Elizabeth
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    I’m in.

    https://www.wonderingwriter.com/

    #59512

    Daeus
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    @that_writer_girl_99 Thanks!

    I just sent you an invitation via google docs.

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    Louise Fowler
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    @daeus Sure, I’ll have a read-through. I think I remember reading that chapter. 😀

    Currently reading The Count of Monte Cristo

    #59606

    Daeus
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    @perfectfifths Thanks. Just sent you an invitation to a google doc.

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    #59612

    Louise Fowler
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    @daeus That was half an hour ago, and I still haven’t gotten on. :\ Would it be via email?

    Currently reading The Count of Monte Cristo

    #59620

    Daeus
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    @perfectfifths Yes, I sent it via email. If you haven’t got the invitation, here’s a link to it.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/12ZY5PcSrhX1LdSb69sP_tD4MnPqYZxuCyz6Zwr4i7W8/edit?usp=sharing

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    Ingrid
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    @daeus  Okay, so I just clicked on the link…and couldn’t stop reading.  This is magnificent!  I only made one comment at the end, but that’s just a suggestion.  🙂  Great work!

    A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)

    #59623

    Louise Fowler
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    @daeus Thanks. I don’t know why I didn’t receive it. 🙂

    What kind of feedback are you looking for?

    Currently reading The Count of Monte Cristo

    #59625

    Daeus
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    @perfectfifths Well, anything, but I think particularly descriptions/sentence structure. I want to make sure it flows just right and is easy to envision.

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    #59629

    Louise Fowler
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    @daeus Right-o. I’ll look at it tomorrow. 🙂

    Currently reading The Count of Monte Cristo

    #59774

    Daeus
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    @kate-flournoy Just tagging you because you’re normally into this. If you want to do it, I’ll get you your own doc.

     

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    #59775

    Kate Flournoy
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    Kate Flournoy
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    If you had not tagged me and I’d missed the opportunity you’d have been in serious trouble.


    Daeus
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    @kate-flournoy I hate being in serious trouble.

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