The Diary Of Nameless

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January 9, 2018 at 11:04 am #59504
Daeus
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Hi KeePers,

Some of you may remember a while ago when I posted the first chapter of a short story of diary entries from a character in a novel who doesn’t have a name.

I’ve had the story complete for two months or so and I just finally gave it an edit, so now I’m ready to look for beta readers.

If any of you are interested, it’s a truly short story — only about 3,000 words. It follows the of a character in a novel who struggles with the apparent cruelty of life. I think it turned out well, but we’ll see. 🙂

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January 9, 2018 at 11:06 am #59505
Elizabeth
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I’m in.

Writer. Dreamer. Sometimes blogger. MBTI mess. Lover of Jesus and books.
January 9, 2018 at 1:08 pm #59512
Daeus
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@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks!

I just sent you an invitation via google docs.

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January 9, 2018 at 9:07 pm #59597
Louise Fowler
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@daeus Sure, I’ll have a read-through. I think I remember reading that chapter. 😀

Currently reading Les Miserables
January 9, 2018 at 9:42 pm #59606
Daeus
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@perfectfifths Thanks. Just sent you an invitation to a google doc.

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January 9, 2018 at 10:15 pm #59612
Louise Fowler
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@daeus That was half an hour ago, and I still haven’t gotten on. :\ Would it be via email?

Currently reading Les Miserables
January 10, 2018 at 7:34 am #59620
Daeus
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@perfectfifths Yes, I sent it via email. If you haven’t got the invitation, here’s a link to it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/12ZY5PcSrhX1LdSb69sP_tD4MnPqYZxuCyz6Zwr4i7W8/edit?usp=sharing

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January 10, 2018 at 8:19 am #59622
Ingrid
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@daeus Okay, so I just clicked on the link…and couldn’t stop reading. This is magnificent! I only made one comment at the end, but that’s just a suggestion. 🙂 Great work!

A dreamer who believes in the impossible...and dragons. (INFJ-T)
January 10, 2018 at 8:21 am #59623
Louise Fowler
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@daeus Thanks. I don’t know why I didn’t receive it. 🙂

What kind of feedback are you looking for?

Currently reading Les Miserables
January 10, 2018 at 9:02 am #59625
Daeus
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@perfectfifths Well, anything, but I think particularly descriptions/sentence structure. I want to make sure it flows just right and is easy to envision.

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January 10, 2018 at 9:20 am #59629
Louise Fowler
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@daeus Right-o. I’ll look at it tomorrow. 🙂

Currently reading Les Miserables
January 10, 2018 at 10:08 pm #59774
Daeus
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@kate-flournoy Just tagging you because you’re normally into this. If you want to do it, I’ll get you your own doc.

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January 10, 2018 at 10:16 pm #59775
Kate Flournoy
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@Daeus yes!

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January 10, 2018 at 10:20 pm #59776
Kate Flournoy
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If you had not tagged me and I’d missed the opportunity you’d have been in serious trouble.

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January 11, 2018 at 9:25 am #59806
Daeus
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@kate-flournoy I hate being in serious trouble.

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