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February 3, 2018 at 11:05 am #62257
@seekjustice Is that the scene where the marriage is interrupted by his wife, and Jane decides to leave?
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
February 4, 2018 at 7:33 pm #62417@rochellaine The first part is when Mr Rochester asks Jane to marry him, after pretending to be engaged to another girl, the second bit is just a paraphrase of the lengthy conversation that follow when Jane finds out about his wife, yes :D.
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
April 2, 2018 at 5:34 am #69787And here is the day we’ve waited for and now is the best of times!!!
Whoops! Ahem, I didn’t mean to start quoting A Tale of Two Cities…or did I?
Either way, the day ew have all been waiting for has arrive and I present…*drumroll*
When Infinity is Empty Prologue–Chapter 2.
Hopefully that excites you. Also, it’s completely unedited and I only wrote it today. I’m also struggling a bit with Justice as a point of view character so if you have any tips there, let me know 🙂
tagging those who are interested
@skredder @sleepwalkingmk (if you’d like to) @jenwriter17 @rochellaine(JUST A NOTE, YOU’LL HAVE TO REQUEST ACCESS BECAUSE I DON’T REALLY WANT JUST ANYONE BEING ABLE TO ACCESS IT. I FEEL THE NEED TO PUT THIS IN CAPITALS JUST BECAUSE I CAN :D)
Enjoy!
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
April 2, 2018 at 6:32 am #69791@seekjustice YESSSSSSS! *dances*
I don’t see the link anywhere though… 🙁
Read to explore worlds, write to create them.
April 2, 2018 at 8:18 am #69793YAYY!!!
Drat it! Google docs and I aren’t talking today. Okay everyone, here is the link
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kdetvZPqqTzfuapzrNpwnHcoPkUuFVLkPaVl_BM6K-w/edit?usp=sharing
@rochellaine @skredder @jenwriter17INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
April 2, 2018 at 12:36 pm #69808@seekjustice Yay! I can’t wait to read it! I requested access 🙂
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www.jennaterese.comApril 2, 2018 at 1:02 pm #69810@seekjustice I just finished watching ATOTC 1958. I am weeping, comfort me! I am thankful it is the first two chapters of your novel you have given us, rather than the last, for I could never bear it.
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
April 2, 2018 at 1:20 pm #69816@seekjustice This is gonna be good! I also requested access. 🙂
"For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."
April 2, 2018 at 6:01 pm #69838@seekjustice You awful person, you! How could you not warn me, after I told you I had a rough day with ATOTC?! I had only gotten a few paragraphs into Justice’s POV when I started crying again! 🙁 Oh, Sapphire! Oh, Kendall! Oh, Waif! Oh, everyone!
😀 😀 It was great, as always! I can’t wait to read the next part.
- This reply was modified 5 years, 12 months ago by Rochellaine.
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April 2, 2018 at 6:09 pm #69841well, I would have thought you would have learnt by now 😀
I have to go, but I’ll be on later 😀
INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.
April 2, 2018 at 6:14 pm #69842@jenwriter17 @sleepwalkingmk Is not @seekjustice heartless? She has no words of sympathy or comfort for her weeping reader, but simply tells me I “should have learnt by now!”
(See above for explanation.)
Seekjustice: Okay, see you tonight! (If I’m not still heartbroken by then.)
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
April 2, 2018 at 7:14 pm #69849@rochellaine lol, your meme is very accurate! 😀
bad girl, @seekjustice, bad girl! Your readers are weeping oceans and you just say we “should have learnt by now”?!
😛
I’m on page 11 right now. Awesomeness so far 😉 I should finish it within the next hour, cuz I had a few other things to take care of (ahem, like my broken heart). 😉
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www.jennaterese.comApril 2, 2018 at 7:29 pm #69855@seekjustice I finished it! (I pushed off my to do list to finish it because I couldn’t stop 😉 )
I love this so much already! It feels so good to read about these characters again, and I love how Chessy and Justice’s relationship has gotten.
But, uh…………
CLIFFHANGERRRRRRRR!
I am so looking forward to the next part!!! 😀
I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
www.jennaterese.comApril 2, 2018 at 8:27 pm #69860@jenwriter17 Shall I cause a great horror to come upon you by saying I didn’t ship Chessy and Justice really at all during the reading of Stars Fill Infinity? 😉 I actually told @seekjustice I didn’t think that they should end up as a couple.
*backs away warily*
"Sylvester - Sylvester!"
April 2, 2018 at 8:40 pm #69868I feel like a successful author when people say they put off their to-do list to read my book. I mean, I’d feel like a failure if you told me you’d left half way through to sweep the kitchen or something 😛
And being a successful author and all, it is my duty to supply you with as many cliffhangers as I can muster.
Chessy and Justice aren’t a “thing” yet, so don’t worry. But still, it’s my great goal to convince @rochellaine that they should be a thing.
Fine. *hugs awkwardly*. I love you all.
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