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  • #62257
    Rochellaine
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      @seekjustice Is that the scene where the marriage is interrupted by his wife, and Jane decides to leave?

      "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

      #62417
      SeekJustice
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        @rochellaine The first part is when Mr Rochester asks Jane to marry him, after pretending to be engaged to another girl, the second bit is just a paraphrase of the lengthy conversation that follow when Jane finds out about his wife, yes :D.

        INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

        #69787
        SeekJustice
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          And here is the day we’ve waited for and now is the best of times!!!

          Whoops! Ahem, I didn’t mean to start quoting A Tale of Two Cities…or did I?

          Either way, the day ew have all been waiting for has arrive and I present…*drumroll*

          When Infinity is Empty Prologue–Chapter 2.

          Hopefully that excites you. Also, it’s completely unedited and I only wrote it today. I’m also struggling a bit with Justice as a point of view character so if you have any tips there, let me know 🙂

          tagging those who are interested


          @skredder
          @sleepwalkingmk (if you’d like to) @jenwriter17 @rochellaine

          (JUST A NOTE, YOU’LL HAVE TO REQUEST ACCESS BECAUSE I DON’T REALLY WANT JUST ANYONE BEING ABLE TO ACCESS IT. I FEEL THE NEED TO PUT THIS IN CAPITALS JUST BECAUSE I CAN :D)

          Enjoy!

          INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

          #69791
          SleepwalkingMK
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            @seekjustice YESSSSSSS! *dances*

            I don’t see the link anywhere though… 🙁

            Read to explore worlds, write to create them.

            #69793
            SeekJustice
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              @sleepwalkingmk

              YAYY!!!

              Drat it! Google docs and I aren’t talking today. Okay everyone, here is the link

              https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kdetvZPqqTzfuapzrNpwnHcoPkUuFVLkPaVl_BM6K-w/edit?usp=sharing


              @rochellaine
              @skredder @jenwriter17

              INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

              #69808
              Jenna Terese
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                @seekjustice Yay! I can’t wait to read it! I requested access 🙂

                I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                #69810
                Rochellaine
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                  @seekjustice I just finished watching ATOTC 1958.  I am weeping, comfort me!  I am thankful it is the first two chapters of your novel you have given us, rather than the last, for I could never bear it.

                  "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                  #69816
                  Skredder
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                    @seekjustice This is gonna be good! I also requested access. 🙂

                    "For God hath not given us the spirit of fear; but of power, and of love, and of a sound mind."

                    #69838
                    Rochellaine
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                      @seekjustice You awful person, you!  How could you not warn me, after I told you I had a rough day with ATOTC?!  I had only gotten a few paragraphs into Justice’s POV when I started crying again! 🙁  Oh, Sapphire!  Oh, Kendall!  Oh, Waif!  Oh, everyone!

                      Ginger Rogers Crying

                      😀 😀 It was great, as always!  I can’t wait to read the next part.

                      • This reply was modified 5 years, 12 months ago by Rochellaine.

                      "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                      #69841
                      SeekJustice
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                        @rochellaine

                        well, I would have thought you would have learnt by now 😀

                        I have to go, but I’ll be on later 😀

                        INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

                        #69842
                        Rochellaine
                        @rochellaine
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                          @jenwriter17 @sleepwalkingmk  Is not @seekjustice heartless?  She has no words of sympathy or comfort for her weeping reader, but simply tells me I “should have learnt by now!”

                          (See above for explanation.)

                          Seekjustice: Okay, see you tonight!  (If I’m not still heartbroken by then.)

                          "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                          #69849
                          Jenna Terese
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                            @rochellaine lol, your meme is very accurate! 😀

                            bad girl, @seekjustice, bad girl! Your readers are weeping oceans and you just say we “should have learnt by now”?!

                            😛

                            I’m on page 11 right now. Awesomeness so far 😉 I should finish it within the next hour, cuz I had a few other things to take care of (ahem, like my broken heart). 😉

                            I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
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                            #69855
                            Jenna Terese
                            @jenwriter17
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                              @seekjustice I finished it! (I pushed off my to do list to finish it because I couldn’t stop 😉 )

                              I love this so much already! It feels so good to read about these characters again, and I love how Chessy and Justice’s relationship has gotten.

                              But, uh…………

                              CLIFFHANGERRRRRRRR!

                              I am so looking forward to the next part!!! 😀

                              I'm a Kapeefer 'TIL WE'RE OLD AND GREY!
                              www.jennaterese.com

                              #69860
                              Rochellaine
                              @rochellaine
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                                @jenwriter17 Shall I cause a great horror to come upon you by saying I didn’t ship Chessy and Justice really at all during the reading of Stars Fill Infinity? 😉  I actually told @seekjustice I didn’t think that they should end up as a couple.

                                *backs away warily*

                                "Sylvester - Sylvester!"

                                #69868
                                SeekJustice
                                @seekjustice
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                                  @jenwriter17

                                  I feel like a successful author when people say they put off their to-do list to read my book. I mean, I’d feel like a failure if you told me you’d left half way through to sweep the kitchen or something 😛

                                  And being a successful author and all, it is my duty to supply you with as many cliffhangers as I can muster.

                                  Chessy and Justice aren’t a “thing” yet, so don’t worry. But still, it’s my great goal to convince @rochellaine that they should be a thing.

                                  Fine. *hugs awkwardly*. I love you all.

                                  INFP Queen of the Kingdom commander of an army of origami cranes and a sabre from Babylon.

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