Rook's Book Blurb

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  • January 4, 2018 at 6:10 pm #58907
    Anonymous
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      @mariposa Good suggestion! I like it. 🙂


      @Sam-kowal       I was wondering if that was too disconnected. I may indeed have to change it up. Thanks 🙂


      @Ethryndal       Haha, I’m glad. Ah, I was wondering if that would be confusing. Thanks for mentioning it. 🙂


      @supermonkey42       @kate-flournoy

      Thanks again guys! 🙂

      January 5, 2018 at 4:33 pm #59067
      Jenna Terese
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        @winter-rose First, I think the blurb is very interesting. I agree with some of the others; it might be a tad long. And it might add a little something if there was some backstory to Rook’s avoidance of girls. Other than that, I think it’s great!

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